Leslie Ann's Exploits
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "A new reality for Leslie Ann"A spoiled young lady who learns the hard way
26 total reviews
Comment from Healthyheartpoet
This is a dramatic little story filled with hate, jealousy and vengeance. All of these emotions make for an interesting read. It raises a lot of questions as to the final outcome and the twist and turn of fate. The author has done a good job of portraying all of these interesting toxic characters.
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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This is a dramatic little story filled with hate, jealousy and vengeance. All of these emotions make for an interesting read. It raises a lot of questions as to the final outcome and the twist and turn of fate. The author has done a good job of portraying all of these interesting toxic characters.
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Thank you so much, Healthyheartpoet! I really did enjoy writing the Leslie Ann saga, although at times I had some difficulty deciding what to do with the mischievous little minx. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Peace and blessing to you!
Comment from God's Writer
The end! I know I joined in late, but I was enjoying the story and the way you write in quatrains. It is a lot easier on my eyes. Thank you for writing these wonderful chapters.
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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The end! I know I joined in late, but I was enjoying the story and the way you write in quatrains. It is a lot easier on my eyes. Thank you for writing these wonderful chapters.
Comment Written 11-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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It's better late than never, and I so appreciate you reading this last chapter! I wish you peace and blessings!!
Comment from Flamingbush
Nice rhymes in this, good use of quotes, good flow. I went back to read a few earlier chapters and think you have written an very interesting story. A story in rhyme! It's very clever, and you do a good job fitting the many different pieces together.
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Nice rhymes in this, good use of quotes, good flow. I went back to read a few earlier chapters and think you have written an very interesting story. A story in rhyme! It's very clever, and you do a good job fitting the many different pieces together.
Comment Written 10-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Flamingbush, many thanks for reading my Leslie Ann story-poem book!
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You're very welcome. Have a great day!
Comment from steevie
Wow! This was a fun ride, Dossie!!! I enjoyed each and every chapter. Poor old Leslie. Its too bad because she could be so good and for someone she eventually meets, but she isn't wired that way. Her perception of life is skewed and not normal. The world is full of women like her. Such a a waste, a pretty young girl.
I hope you star6t another series, Dossie, cause if you don't, I will have to hound you until you relent. LOL
Thank you for entertaining us all, sweetie. You're a terrific writer and poet.
hugs
smiles
steve
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Wow! This was a fun ride, Dossie!!! I enjoyed each and every chapter. Poor old Leslie. Its too bad because she could be so good and for someone she eventually meets, but she isn't wired that way. Her perception of life is skewed and not normal. The world is full of women like her. Such a a waste, a pretty young girl.
I hope you star6t another series, Dossie, cause if you don't, I will have to hound you until you relent. LOL
Thank you for entertaining us all, sweetie. You're a terrific writer and poet.
hugs
smiles
steve
Comment Written 10-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Steevie, many thanks for reading my Leslie Ann story-poem book. You are such an inspiration and I appreciate you SO much. Keep on pushing me, because I can be quite remiss at times. Dossie
Dossie, you're so cute. I will help you out in any way you like when it comes to your writing. You are a fine writer and I have learned many things from you already since I've known you ... thank you for that!
I think we all have busy lives and so you can only do what you can, and even t that, if we push too hard on our recreational writing, we risk losing the joy in it. Keep it fun, Dossie!! :o)
your friend
steve
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Dossie,
This is an excellent ending to the Mary Ann and Leslie Ann saga. Some lessons in life are almost too much to bear. Leslie Ann learned that at last. It is an excellent story; I enjoyed it very much.
Curtis
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Dossie,
This is an excellent ending to the Mary Ann and Leslie Ann saga. Some lessons in life are almost too much to bear. Leslie Ann learned that at last. It is an excellent story; I enjoyed it very much.
Curtis
Comment Written 10-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Curtis, I appreciate all your encouraging comments, they mean so much to me. This saga took a lot of effort and frankly there were times I wanted to scuttle it, but with your continuing encouragement, I finished it. Thanks so much for the stars, they're an added bonus and they made my day! Dossie
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Unfortunately I have missed out on several chapters is appears. It was very plain and easy to follow. If I can get a moment I'll try to catch up on the other chapters. I can't remember if I told you that Barnes & Noble has agreed to carry my book. You should be getting your book and the check soon. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Unfortunately I have missed out on several chapters is appears. It was very plain and easy to follow. If I can get a moment I'll try to catch up on the other chapters. I can't remember if I told you that Barnes & Noble has agreed to carry my book. You should be getting your book and the check soon. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 10-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Evelyn, thanks so much for your comments. I always appreciate it when you stop by, so don't be a stranger - I believe that's a southern affectation - LOL. Dossie
Comment from kashmayank
well love is an amazing emotion and I believe to an extent one should be possesive in love but thats a personal opinion all the best
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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well love is an amazing emotion and I believe to an extent one should be possesive in love but thats a personal opinion all the best
Comment Written 10-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Kashmayank, many thanks for reading my Leslie Ann story-poem book!
Comment from country ranch writer
BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR IT CAN BACK FIRE AND YOU WILL END UP LIKE HER ALL ALONE WHILE EVERYONE ELSE GOES ON WITH THEIR LIVES,SHE MUST BE THINKING LIFE SUCKS
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR IT CAN BACK FIRE AND YOU WILL END UP LIKE HER ALL ALONE WHILE EVERYONE ELSE GOES ON WITH THEIR LIVES,SHE MUST BE THINKING LIFE SUCKS
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Country ranch writer, I always appreciate your thoughtful reviews and this one doesn't disappoint. Thanks so much for your support and encouragement, I appreciate both! Dossie
Comment from Vampires kiss
This is an excellent story, I have not been able to read the rest and clearly wish I could,but this story is very well written and flows nicely! Great job keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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This is an excellent story, I have not been able to read the rest and clearly wish I could,but this story is very well written and flows nicely! Great job keep up the good work!
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Vampire Kiss, You're so kind. Thanks so much for your comments and rating, I appreciate both! Dossie
Comment from bayoupoet
The ending to your story was great! I'm sorry it's the only part I have read. I can tell it is a fantastic story poem. The picture illustrated your poem very well.
sandra
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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The ending to your story was great! I'm sorry it's the only part I have read. I can tell it is a fantastic story poem. The picture illustrated your poem very well.
sandra
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Sandra, you're so kind. Thanks so much for your comments and rating, I appreciate both! Dossie
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You are very welcome, Dossie!