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Obsevation of nature &, living surrounding.

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Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is a nice start to a poem. It does not fit the 5 syllable, 7 syllable, 5 syllable format, though.
You could shorten the first line like this:
Blooming flow'rs on land

Then second line could be shortened to:
I can't touch with empty hand

Then third line could be:
fearing withering

or

fearing it's withered

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2013

Comment from Starlit Ink
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You went over the correct amount of syllables, but what you are saying is great. I would suggest counting the syllables and then editing, since the syllables should be correct for a contest. Those flowers in nature are definitely fragile, aren't they?

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2013

Comment from trevorletang
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Well done on the 5-7-5 style. The contrast and colour is very fitting for the poem, would have liked to see a beautiful picture to go with it.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2013