Creepy Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Call of the Moon"A touch of Fear
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Comment from Glasstruth
This poem posses that werewolf magic, where the sound of its cry calls for blood in "A Woooooo A Wa Wooooooooooooooo! Superb rhyming. Overall presentation is just magnificent! Les
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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This poem posses that werewolf magic, where the sound of its cry calls for blood in "A Woooooo A Wa Wooooooooooooooo! Superb rhyming. Overall presentation is just magnificent! Les
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Thank you Les. Sounds like you've caught the fever. :-)
Comment from c_lucas
A very well written twist, with as you point out, a wolffy refrain. In a way, it has a humorous overtone. it does show you have talent as a wordsmith.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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A very well written twist, with as you point out, a wolffy refrain. In a way, it has a humorous overtone. it does show you have talent as a wordsmith.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much c_lucas.
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You're welocme
Comment from country ranch writer
the old call of the wild when the moon is out hard to resist especially in the woodlands. It is the full moon that makes people do strange thingsssssssssss
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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the old call of the wild when the moon is out hard to resist especially in the woodlands. It is the full moon that makes people do strange thingsssssssssss
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Thanks you country ranch writer. Yessssss.
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I just read about the full moon a couple days ago on how it makes people do crazy things and etc. Ironic
Comment from Ekim777
Your rhythm is a little cumbersome,Easily corrected. It buckles to fit into the rhyme scheme. Perhaps the emphasis should move from the narrator to the wolf. Let the canine tell the story. e.g. 'I'm a mad dog, a bad dog; a wild dog, I roam.I love to sit and bay the moon, to keep fats souls from sleep./' But it's your poem. -Ekim777
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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Your rhythm is a little cumbersome,Easily corrected. It buckles to fit into the rhyme scheme. Perhaps the emphasis should move from the narrator to the wolf. Let the canine tell the story. e.g. 'I'm a mad dog, a bad dog; a wild dog, I roam.I love to sit and bay the moon, to keep fats souls from sleep./' But it's your poem. -Ekim777
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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Thanks Ekim. Some good ideas, maybe for another poem.
Comment from onkughosh19
A refreshingly different type of poem.The rhyming is so beautiful that the poem sounds musical A brilliantly written poem with imagery so vivid that you feel you are present in the forest witnessing a wolf calling its mate and.......A very
apt title and a lovely accompanying picture.
An exceptional read.Would recommend it to everyone.I loved this write.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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A refreshingly different type of poem.The rhyming is so beautiful that the poem sounds musical A brilliantly written poem with imagery so vivid that you feel you are present in the forest witnessing a wolf calling its mate and.......A very
apt title and a lovely accompanying picture.
An exceptional read.Would recommend it to everyone.I loved this write.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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Thank you onkughosh. Wow! I'm so pleased with the high value you placed on this work.
Comment from Kingsland
I will take it from the way this poem is written that you become a wolf man when the full moon rises. This was a well written verse with good flowing poetic verve. I enjoyed reading this tale of the wolf man... John
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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I will take it from the way this poem is written that you become a wolf man when the full moon rises. This was a well written verse with good flowing poetic verve. I enjoyed reading this tale of the wolf man... John
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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Thank you John. I've been know to howl at the moon.
Comment from joneau2
Another great verse. I sincerely enjoy reading your works and have become a fan. I welcome you to read mine. Well done again.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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Another great verse. I sincerely enjoy reading your works and have become a fan. I welcome you to read mine. Well done again.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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Thank you very much joneau. I'll take a look.
Comment from Selina Stambi
A Woooooo A Wa Wooooooooooooooo!
This is a weirdly wonderful wolverine stunner - Dean Kuch will love it!
I love the yowls between the stanzas. How beautifully you've created the atmosphere of the moonlit night .... and then you're all a-furred and clawed!!!
Creatively crafted creepiness....
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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A Woooooo A Wa Wooooooooooooooo!
This is a weirdly wonderful wolverine stunner - Dean Kuch will love it!
I love the yowls between the stanzas. How beautifully you've created the atmosphere of the moonlit night .... and then you're all a-furred and clawed!!!
Creatively crafted creepiness....
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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Thank you Sobali. I took a picture today that I'm really excited about. A poem wrote itself from it. Can't wait to post it. I got a Goldfinch in a bending bush with it head bent as if in prayer at twilight. It's a stunning photo.
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I PMed Dean Kuch and asked him to check this poem out - I know he'll love it. :)
Comment from Gungalo
Call of the moon to a wolfman ... hmmm. It is so eerie and yet so attractive Tom. I love the refrain. Like to hear it done.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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Call of the moon to a wolfman ... hmmm. It is so eerie and yet so attractive Tom. I love the refrain. Like to hear it done.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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Thank you Gungalo. When I read it aloud it's really good.
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Smile.
Comment from Joan E.
Your dramatic presentation with your photograph is perfect reinforcing your transformation into a werewolf. I admired your rhymed couplets, repeats of onomatopoeia and alliteration of "w's". Scarey! -Joan
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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Your dramatic presentation with your photograph is perfect reinforcing your transformation into a werewolf. I admired your rhymed couplets, repeats of onomatopoeia and alliteration of "w's". Scarey! -Joan
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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Thanks Joan. It was meant to be scary, so I guess I succeeded.
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Indeed you did--scary and a half! -J
