Creepy Poems
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Comment from Robin Gilmor
Well written. A bit different in form and tempo but very enjoyable. Sad
message that happens much too often. Hope you are enjoying good weather.
Smiles, Robin :)
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2013
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Well written. A bit different in form and tempo but very enjoyable. Sad
message that happens much too often. Hope you are enjoying good weather.
Smiles, Robin :)
Comment Written 04-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2013
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Thank you Robin, yes, the weather has been delightful.
Comment from robina1978
Lovely photo once more taken by you that complements your poem well. This is a nice form you used and not so difficult perhaps. I don't think he looks like he is up to anything.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2013
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Lovely photo once more taken by you that complements your poem well. This is a nice form you used and not so difficult perhaps. I don't think he looks like he is up to anything.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2013
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Thanks Ine.
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most welcome, Ine
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent poem with excellent flow and rhyme and unusual rhyme pattern consistently followed. It offers a great compassionate moral action which we should consider more often. I liked this poem.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent poem with excellent flow and rhyme and unusual rhyme pattern consistently followed. It offers a great compassionate moral action which we should consider more often. I liked this poem.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thank you Preston.
Comment from Gungalo
But when I get seen,
Considered obscene.
It's really so mean.
Please, don't make a scene!
Oh but what did you do, Tom? You took his picture and made his privacy public. LOL for shame on you.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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But when I get seen,
Considered obscene.
It's really so mean.
Please, don't make a scene!
Oh but what did you do, Tom? You took his picture and made his privacy public. LOL for shame on you.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thank you Gungalo. Hmmm. I guess I did.
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Smile guy.
Comment from Johnny-artist
Treischel +a wonderful to the point poetry where the photo has a place~ going with curiosity of a person's extra self. I liked the give and take of the social concerns here~ bringing me to have empathy for those in similar situations... a microcosmic of stylish declarations that aren't always understood. It very well could be that one wants to feel good while being creative~ a Halloween
sort of way. Or maybe one wants to declare through rebellion
a sense ego. People are important. We're all in this together.
I think that this one could be sixed by extending through with another stanza or more. Thanks for sharing. Great work! uncleJohn
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Treischel +a wonderful to the point poetry where the photo has a place~ going with curiosity of a person's extra self. I liked the give and take of the social concerns here~ bringing me to have empathy for those in similar situations... a microcosmic of stylish declarations that aren't always understood. It very well could be that one wants to feel good while being creative~ a Halloween
sort of way. Or maybe one wants to declare through rebellion
a sense ego. People are important. We're all in this together.
I think that this one could be sixed by extending through with another stanza or more. Thanks for sharing. Great work! uncleJohn
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thank you UncleJohn. We never know about a person until we get to know them.
Comment from ravenblack
There are instances where one is an outsider through no fault of their own and some where it is a deliberate choice. Glad you pretty much left it up to the picture,not choosing sides allowing the reader to do so. The guy looks at Hyde. Hate to say it, but I would probably judge the book by the cover and keep my kids close.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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There are instances where one is an outsider through no fault of their own and some where it is a deliberate choice. Glad you pretty much left it up to the picture,not choosing sides allowing the reader to do so. The guy looks at Hyde. Hate to say it, but I would probably judge the book by the cover and keep my kids close.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thanks Ravenblack, you have a point.
Comment from sunnilicious
I don't like people that say they don't fit in all the time. If you do things to standout... There is a reason. It's not a matter of looks. It must be a personality problem. However, you made it into a good poem. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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I don't like people that say they don't fit in all the time. If you do things to standout... There is a reason. It's not a matter of looks. It must be a personality problem. However, you made it into a good poem. Excellent work.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thank you Sunnilicious. Understand your point.
Comment from Sararb
I really enjoyed reading this poem. You did a great job. Yes you are right people can be cruel when people are different. I find it to be so sad, but it happens daily in schools across the country. Sararb :)
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. You did a great job. Yes you are right people can be cruel when people are different. I find it to be so sad, but it happens daily in schools across the country. Sararb :)
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thanks Sara. it is sad and can lead to physical and emotional bullying.
Comment from Capricorn30
An eerie illustration;
As one is uncertain of the circumstances surrounding this scene, your well-penned thoughts assist in putting this situation into perspective, as we all wish to be accepted.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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An eerie illustration;
As one is uncertain of the circumstances surrounding this scene, your well-penned thoughts assist in putting this situation into perspective, as we all wish to be accepted.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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thanks Margaret. It was a bizarre scene.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Oh, you are so right-on with this message, Mr. 'T'! Anyone that has ever seen the touching, heartwarming story of Joseph Merrick, better know as "The Elephant Man" knows exactly where you're coming from. People are cruel, especially teenagers these days. So sorry, kiddies, but it's true. Many of you are a cruel, mean and vicious lot!
Great job sir, and I applaud your efforts to draw attention to such atrocities!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Oh, you are so right-on with this message, Mr. 'T'! Anyone that has ever seen the touching, heartwarming story of Joseph Merrick, better know as "The Elephant Man" knows exactly where you're coming from. People are cruel, especially teenagers these days. So sorry, kiddies, but it's true. Many of you are a cruel, mean and vicious lot!
Great job sir, and I applaud your efforts to draw attention to such atrocities!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thank you Dean. I appreciate your understanding and support.
