Ghost uncle Ghost uncle
funny jokes for all little friends3 total reviews
Comment from Green Lake Girl
I give you five stars for trying to write poetry in a language unfamiliar to you. Your profiles says you are from India. Keep trying. The best way to earn another language is to jump in. I applaud you.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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I give you five stars for trying to write poetry in a language unfamiliar to you. Your profiles says you are from India. Keep trying. The best way to earn another language is to jump in. I applaud you.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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thank you so much for his great full comment.
Comment from joneau2
Sorry. I don't get it. I can't grasp the transition, or for that matter the entire point. You also forced words like "fuwell." I suppose you're from Great Britain, or educated in some English school because of the way you spelled "priour." However, technically right on.
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Sorry. I don't get it. I can't grasp the transition, or for that matter the entire point. You also forced words like "fuwell." I suppose you're from Great Britain, or educated in some English school because of the way you spelled "priour." However, technically right on.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
Comment from ste7e
had my interest for the first three lines.then totally confused me,have no comprehension of what your trying to convey.utterly incomprehensible,sorry, you started so well too. could have had something going there.but then you inhaled too deeply on the weed my friend and drifted off into ether.
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had my interest for the first three lines.then totally confused me,have no comprehension of what your trying to convey.utterly incomprehensible,sorry, you started so well too. could have had something going there.but then you inhaled too deeply on the weed my friend and drifted off into ether.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
