5-7-5 poem
DA's frailty25 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
You have emotions and feelings in few words. We can be an adult but still have the frailty's of a child. Excellent 5-7-5 form and use of words to capture the essence of a woman.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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You have emotions and feelings in few words. We can be an adult but still have the frailty's of a child. Excellent 5-7-5 form and use of words to capture the essence of a woman.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your thoughtful comments and personal remarks. teafor2
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Us women never stop being little girls as we sometimes cry like children when the mood takes us. I enjoyed this one and this picture looks like Ruth Ellis who was the last woman to hang in Britain for killing her cheating boyfriend, she had the last laugh, but cried and died for it, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Us women never stop being little girls as we sometimes cry like children when the mood takes us. I enjoyed this one and this picture looks like Ruth Ellis who was the last woman to hang in Britain for killing her cheating boyfriend, she had the last laugh, but cried and died for it, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your personal comments and thoughtful remarks. teafor2
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi this read makes me think that she is a complete woman. She has got faith, sensibility , she can love and even cries...what more can one expect from a woman . Just a spectacular piece of marvellous human being.
Benny
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Hi this read makes me think that she is a complete woman. She has got faith, sensibility , she can love and even cries...what more can one expect from a woman . Just a spectacular piece of marvellous human being.
Benny
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Benny, thanks for your thoughtful comments and personal remarks.
Your response is appreciated. teafor2
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It is all right,
Benny
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Of course. That's a real woman for you! You've captured it succinctly and beautifully, complemented with a stunning, eye-catching image. Your title description, though, is a bit cryptic. Are we allowed to know whose frailty it is? Warmest wishes Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Of course. That's a real woman for you! You've captured it succinctly and beautifully, complemented with a stunning, eye-catching image. Your title description, though, is a bit cryptic. Are we allowed to know whose frailty it is? Warmest wishes Debbie
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your thoughtful comments and personal remarks. You have no idea how glad I am you weighed in on this one...Moreover,
did you peruse the posts by Wendy G and Jim Wile?
Comment from Karen Cherry
She is lovely. How long ago did you write this? I wrote Tom about all the small print on here lately. this is what he wrote back:
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Thanks,
Tom And it works. Karen
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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She is lovely. How long ago did you write this? I wrote Tom about all the small print on here lately. this is what he wrote back:
We support the ability to change your font with your browser. Usually pressing CTRL and + will increase the font size.
Thanks,
Tom And it works. Karen
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thanks, Karen for your thoughtful comments and personal remarks.
Your concern is appreciated.
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Thanks for the suggestion.
Comment from njcoleman
Excellent. Your art choice depicts exactly what your words say: strong, tough, independent. But deep down, still a little girl.
Excellent song choice as well, by the way. Nice job, Neil
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Excellent. Your art choice depicts exactly what your words say: strong, tough, independent. But deep down, still a little girl.
Excellent song choice as well, by the way. Nice job, Neil
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your thoughtful comments and personal remarks. teafor2
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi, I like your poem. With a few words, you stress the important things about a woman. I like the picture. Good choice for the poem. Very nice job.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Hi, I like your poem. With a few words, you stress the important things about a woman. I like the picture. Good choice for the poem. Very nice job.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your personal remarks...Your review is appreciated. teafor2
Comment from Harry Craft
A great 5-7-5 poem. A format that I am not too familiar with, but enjoy reading. This is a real subject and makes a great poem for women. I enjoyed reading this poem. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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A great 5-7-5 poem. A format that I am not too familiar with, but enjoy reading. This is a real subject and makes a great poem for women. I enjoyed reading this poem. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your personal remarks and generous comments. teafor2
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You are so welcome!
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Comment from Wendy G
Wonderful poem! You've captured the essence of her womanhood and her sensitivity and vulnerability in a few words. Very thought-provoking, and thoughtfully written. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Wonderful poem! You've captured the essence of her womanhood and her sensitivity and vulnerability in a few words. Very thought-provoking, and thoughtfully written. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your personal remarks and gracious comments. teafor2
Comment from Nicki.B
I love this poem. It has such simplicity in the words yet the words mean so much here. Great imagery to compliment the sentiment. A strong beautiful woamb with that cheeky smirk she has it all!
Well done and thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed it.
Best Wishes
Nicki x
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I love this poem. It has such simplicity in the words yet the words mean so much here. Great imagery to compliment the sentiment. A strong beautiful woamb with that cheeky smirk she has it all!
Well done and thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed it.
Best Wishes
Nicki x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your gracious comments and personal remarks. teafor2
