thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "New Day"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
7 total reviews
Comment from dmt1967
I liked this poem very well written we should thank god for each day we open our eyes and greet a new day lol good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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I liked this poem very well written we should thank god for each day we open our eyes and greet a new day lol good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review and complement ,We should be thankful for each new day I know I am.
Comment from Brocha1
the imagery here combines with your poem to create an inspiring beginning to a new day. I enjoyed this very much.
"Thank you God"
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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the imagery here combines with your poem to create an inspiring beginning to a new day. I enjoyed this very much.
"Thank you God"
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review and kind words,I am thankful to God for every new day.
Comment from rhonny
I really like this poem. It has a lot of simplicity in its lines and words, yet they touch on a great depth of sincere spirituality.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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I really like this poem. It has a lot of simplicity in its lines and words, yet they touch on a great depth of sincere spirituality.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the review and complement I am thankful for each new day
Comment from ann marie mazz
hello
your format is true to form
your theme is lovely
your words and message are true and of value
I will second your thoughts
a new day is a blessing in many ways
your presentation is lovely
thank you for sharing
good luck with the contest
ann marie
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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hello
your format is true to form
your theme is lovely
your words and message are true and of value
I will second your thoughts
a new day is a blessing in many ways
your presentation is lovely
thank you for sharing
good luck with the contest
ann marie
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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hello ann marie thank you for your review and sweet comment Yes every day is a blessing hope you have a good one
Comment from CreativeXXXX
Good work. You have a good idea and have made a good start. A lune poem has syllables 5-7-5 but your first line has only 4. To me the poem could flow better and grammatically it could tightened up (eg the last line - should be let's rather than lets).
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Good work. You have a good idea and have made a good start. A lune poem has syllables 5-7-5 but your first line has only 4. To me the poem could flow better and grammatically it could tightened up (eg the last line - should be let's rather than lets).
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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My bad I am new to this typing thing I forgot to put in the word to was woke up to new day thank you God let's get on our way this was a 5-3-5 13 syllable poem.thanks for your review
Comment from Liz Dunbee
I love the picture and the words, but you are going to have to put another syllable in your first line. There needs to be five for the requirements of this contest. Your second and third lines are perfect. I love the the idea, it is great.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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I love the picture and the words, but you are going to have to put another syllable in your first line. There needs to be five for the requirements of this contest. Your second and third lines are perfect. I love the the idea, it is great.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Thanks I forgot the word " to" in the first line.I am slow on this computer and was trying to hurry.thank you for your review have a great day.
Comment from Sueellen11
Lovely write the blessings of a new day, great entry into the contest, good luck, very well presented lovely picture, enjoyed the read, blessings sueellen
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Lovely write the blessings of a new day, great entry into the contest, good luck, very well presented lovely picture, enjoyed the read, blessings sueellen
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review, and kind words every day is a blessing hope you have a good one.
