Truth Games
A party game goes...wrong?15 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
so what's the problem? - add question mark
talk about the best-laid plans...
What an unexpected outcome to this plan :-)
Good dialogue and character development, and you work the required contest words in well :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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so what's the problem? - add question mark
talk about the best-laid plans...
What an unexpected outcome to this plan :-)
Good dialogue and character development, and you work the required contest words in well :-) Brooke
Comment Written 22-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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Thank you, Brooke, for your kind review. Can you tell me, how do I start your spags course? What happens? I can't wait to get started, I am in desperate need as you might have noticed! :) xsx Sandra
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Class starts on Monday. Over the weekend I'll work out a schedule with you that suits your time zone, etc. I look forward to our class together :-) Brooke
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Thank you, I am too! x
Comment from EMB
Okay. If a person has a relationship with someone else that makes them seem like a brother, how in the world could it get to the point of asking her hand in marriage? Obviously, they haven't kissed or fondled much because he's like a brother. They haven't had any romantic settings because he's like a brother. I just couldn't get my brain around this being a possibility unless she has a history of kissing brothers. Haha!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Okay. If a person has a relationship with someone else that makes them seem like a brother, how in the world could it get to the point of asking her hand in marriage? Obviously, they haven't kissed or fondled much because he's like a brother. They haven't had any romantic settings because he's like a brother. I just couldn't get my brain around this being a possibility unless she has a history of kissing brothers. Haha!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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That is something we will never know! Thank you Edward to your lively review!! :) xsx
Comment from Terror2s
Well, I have always liked a happy ending. You showed us that she was happy with Joey by her response to him before the question, but I liked the way her prior words made the reader fell uncertain. T2
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Well, I have always liked a happy ending. You showed us that she was happy with Joey by her response to him before the question, but I liked the way her prior words made the reader fell uncertain. T2
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your great review, T2! :) x
Comment from angel123
I like your ending. Your story was interesing and well written. It was clear and concise and I liked the characters. It flowed well and I liked your artwork choice. Karen fooled everyone!
Angel123
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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I like your ending. Your story was interesing and well written. It was clear and concise and I liked the characters. It flowed well and I liked your artwork choice. Karen fooled everyone!
Angel123
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, Ange123! :) x
Comment from Supe
Well done. You utilized all the words beautifully. Crazy little story but I can see it happening. I have never heard the word gobsmacked before, yet have read it twice in the last few days. Your ending summed up the whole two days! Good luck.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Well done. You utilized all the words beautifully. Crazy little story but I can see it happening. I have never heard the word gobsmacked before, yet have read it twice in the last few days. Your ending summed up the whole two days! Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for this really lovely review, Supe! :) x
ps. Gobsmacked is quite a common word here, meaning, speechless! xx
Comment from wierdgrace
This is great, and how you used all those words, in a group with the proposal was awesome, romantic, and had me standing on edge. well written, hope yu get the votes you need to win, well done.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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This is great, and how you used all those words, in a group with the proposal was awesome, romantic, and had me standing on edge. well written, hope yu get the votes you need to win, well done.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much! What a lovely review! Thank you. :)
Comment from Judy Couch
Beautiful story. It is well written and leads the reader along nicely to the end. I loved the ending. This is excellent.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Beautiful story. It is well written and leads the reader along nicely to the end. I loved the ending. This is excellent.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Judy!! What a really lovely review. And a big thank you for the 6 stars! :)
Comment from harmony13
Excellent fiction! The story flowed and connected well.
The author gave a good description of the scene. The story was thought provoking. The artwork was perfect and enhanced the read.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Excellent fiction! The story flowed and connected well.
The author gave a good description of the scene. The story was thought provoking. The artwork was perfect and enhanced the read.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review, Harmony13. :)
Comment from Green Lake Girl
I'm curious as can be . . . why in the world did Karen change her mind?? Nice artwork that compliments the story. Good dialog. I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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I'm curious as can be . . . why in the world did Karen change her mind?? Nice artwork that compliments the story. Good dialog. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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LOL, I have written it all wrong! I wish I could pull it out. I am re-writing it, now, and I put it back on later after I see how it turns out. Thank you for reading it, though, you are not alone in your question! :) x
Comment from barleygirl
This is a strange & confusing story, becuz I didn't get any glimpse into this woman's psyche that would help me understand why she did this about-face where the marriage proposal is concerned. Or at least some foreshadow to prepare me for how this was going to turn out. It just didn't seem realistic for her to change that drastically. But despite this issue, the writing is well-done & the story is a good concept. Good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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This is a strange & confusing story, becuz I didn't get any glimpse into this woman's psyche that would help me understand why she did this about-face where the marriage proposal is concerned. Or at least some foreshadow to prepare me for how this was going to turn out. It just didn't seem realistic for her to change that drastically. But despite this issue, the writing is well-done & the story is a good concept. Good luck!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you, Barleygirl.
