St. Patrick's Day
A sad day..........6 total reviews
Comment from EMB
Hmm. This sounds like nonfiction to me because nothing really happens, and a person with the freedom of "fiction" usually has something happening. This reads like a personal account, and the title is misleading. It's definitely not about a holiday; it's about a relationship on the rocks. :)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Hmm. This sounds like nonfiction to me because nothing really happens, and a person with the freedom of "fiction" usually has something happening. This reads like a personal account, and the title is misleading. It's definitely not about a holiday; it's about a relationship on the rocks. :)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thanks for the excellent review and thought provoking comments!
It is fiction yet I agree it not much about St. Patrick's Day more about a relationship on the rocks!
Have a good week......harmony13
Comment from angel123
Your story was interesting and entertaining and I enjoyed reading it. It flowed nicely down the page and it held my attention. I only have no suggestion. I think you should highlight the contest prompt words. I really liked your artwork choice. Good story!
Angel123
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Your story was interesting and entertaining and I enjoyed reading it. It flowed nicely down the page and it held my attention. I only have no suggestion. I think you should highlight the contest prompt words. I really liked your artwork choice. Good story!
Angel123
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and great comments!
I really appreciated your suggestion and will do that....
Comment from Supe
You followed all the rules for this contest and used all the words they instructed you to use. I like the picture you chose to complement the story. In your authors notes you said this was a poem. I read it again, and I disagree. Good luck in the contest.....little leprechaun.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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You followed all the rules for this contest and used all the words they instructed you to use. I like the picture you chose to complement the story. In your authors notes you said this was a poem. I read it again, and I disagree. Good luck in the contest.....little leprechaun.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for the review and great comments! I am so glad you proof read the author's note! Thank you........
Comment from barleygirl
Nice quick read that tells of a complete & understandable situation, with vivid imagery that paints a picture of strong feelings, & the main character changes as a result of what's going on.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Nice quick read that tells of a complete & understandable situation, with vivid imagery that paints a picture of strong feelings, & the main character changes as a result of what's going on.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and great comments.
So glad you enjoyed the story.
Comment from angelface2
You've used all the words needed to make up your story. It sounds a little forced. all of a sudden you're silly then all of sudden you're not. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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You've used all the words needed to make up your story. It sounds a little forced. all of a sudden you're silly then all of sudden you're not. Miss Sally
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer tells the story clearly from beginning to end. The writer using all the required words to meet the qualifications of the contest. This is a good story and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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The writer tells the story clearly from beginning to end. The writer using all the required words to meet the qualifications of the contest. This is a good story and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for the excellent review. I really appreciated your comments.
