Creepy Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Dark Be the Night"A touch of Fear
16 total reviews
Comment from 9999pool
Good write in sextets definitely.
The imagery and metaphor may not be entirely about the dark creatures of the night but vampires in human form who can sucked the life blood out of us.
When they knock on our doors, be weary and be very careful to what they tell us.
Not all is the truth and lies can seem so innocent to them. Between the devils and the human vampires, take serious note of the latter as they can hurt us bad and bring us to our knees. So beware of the deadly thud!
Excellent write about the dark side of humanity which can destroy and maimed us intentionally. Stay clear of them and exercise caution!
Great job Tom! Bravo on this exquisite write. Well done!!
Cheerio, best, Ritchie. :))
P.S. Long review meant a very good write worthy of six stars, smiles. I had chosen a different approach in my interpretation to bring out the other essence of the write, smiles. Me,a riot as always.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Good write in sextets definitely.
The imagery and metaphor may not be entirely about the dark creatures of the night but vampires in human form who can sucked the life blood out of us.
When they knock on our doors, be weary and be very careful to what they tell us.
Not all is the truth and lies can seem so innocent to them. Between the devils and the human vampires, take serious note of the latter as they can hurt us bad and bring us to our knees. So beware of the deadly thud!
Excellent write about the dark side of humanity which can destroy and maimed us intentionally. Stay clear of them and exercise caution!
Great job Tom! Bravo on this exquisite write. Well done!!
Cheerio, best, Ritchie. :))
P.S. Long review meant a very good write worthy of six stars, smiles. I had chosen a different approach in my interpretation to bring out the other essence of the write, smiles. Me,a riot as always.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you Ritchie. You reviews always appreciated. All those stars are exciting too!
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Welcome, Tom.
Have a great day and thanks for sharing this great work.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment from Supe
This is dark, for sure. I like the sextets and the rhyme scheme repeated. Well done. The picture you chose complements the darkness of the written word. I don't usually like this sort of thing, but this, I did.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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This is dark, for sure. I like the sextets and the rhyme scheme repeated. Well done. The picture you chose complements the darkness of the written word. I don't usually like this sort of thing, but this, I did.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you Supe,
Comment from Glasstruth
This would've have been perfect for Halloween. Vampires, the dark, and superstition I suppose is with us forever. Like how you centered it with the black background that creates an excellent mood. Well done! Les
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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This would've have been perfect for Halloween. Vampires, the dark, and superstition I suppose is with us forever. Like how you centered it with the black background that creates an excellent mood. Well done! Les
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you Les, yes, Halloween is just around the corner.
Comment from Rmocruz
A very well rhymed dark verse, dark imagery is poetically presented. Mono rhyme is effectively employed. A clever
utilization of refrain.
An entertaining read.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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A very well rhymed dark verse, dark imagery is poetically presented. Mono rhyme is effectively employed. A clever
utilization of refrain.
An entertaining read.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you Rmocruz. I appreciate your time and comments.
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You're welcome, my pleasure.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This seems like it would be great for Halloween, like a greeting card for pre-teens or something, or a decoration on a door. I like the rhyme scheme.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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This seems like it would be great for Halloween, like a greeting card for pre-teens or something, or a decoration on a door. I like the rhyme scheme.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you CrystieCookie999. Yes, I appreciate your insights.
Comment from Leineco
Very nice warning you've penned,
reminding us not to spend
time in the dark where vampires rend
our skin and drink blood
or zombies limp by with a drag and a thud
craving fresh brains, so tasty and good!
:-)
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Very nice warning you've penned,
reminding us not to spend
time in the dark where vampires rend
our skin and drink blood
or zombies limp by with a drag and a thud
craving fresh brains, so tasty and good!
:-)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Yes, for sure. Thank you Leineco.
Comment from Charlene0513
A demon possessed poem that exhibits much terror and duress.
With so much hatred in this world today it seems that everyone must watch their backs for the next culprit.
Charlene
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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A demon possessed poem that exhibits much terror and duress.
With so much hatred in this world today it seems that everyone must watch their backs for the next culprit.
Charlene
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you Charkene. Sad, but true.
Comment from Gungalo
A fine write of blood and mayhem Ton. LOL you really got into it here. Like this part the best:
For Evil preys
On those who stray
Where Demons play!
For blood they drool,
And life is cruel
To heedless fool.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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A fine write of blood and mayhem Ton. LOL you really got into it here. Like this part the best:
For Evil preys
On those who stray
Where Demons play!
For blood they drool,
And life is cruel
To heedless fool.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you Gungalo.
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Smile.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Very well written and formatted.
Quite entertaining but not gory.
Very cleverly compiled in the Sextet fomat with a 3 line Teroet as a refrain.I quite liked this style and it is rhymed as well. Great.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013
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Very well written and formatted.
Quite entertaining but not gory.
Very cleverly compiled in the Sextet fomat with a 3 line Teroet as a refrain.I quite liked this style and it is rhymed as well. Great.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013
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Thank you seken58. I appreciate this review.
Comment from Sueellen11
Excellent poem, bit dark, but well presented, eerie, scary, glad I don't have dreams like this, yes beware the dark of night, where demons roam, excellent poetry style, well done, blessings, sueellen
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013
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Excellent poem, bit dark, but well presented, eerie, scary, glad I don't have dreams like this, yes beware the dark of night, where demons roam, excellent poetry style, well done, blessings, sueellen
Comment Written 25-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013
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Thank you sueellen. Pleasant dreams! :-))
