Ode to This Day
8/8/8/8 monorhyme19 total reviews
Comment from Deborah Marie
Good luck in the contest with a well penned Ode entry in monorhyme. Lovely use of wording, progression, rhythm and flow. Nice photo too, Deb
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Good luck in the contest with a well penned Ode entry in monorhyme. Lovely use of wording, progression, rhythm and flow. Nice photo too, Deb
Comment Written 24-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thanks so very much, Deb. I always appreciate your reviews~Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very strong contest entry. I love the idea of an ode to this day, that's perfect. We should all be thankful for a new day. Your poem flowed well and the rhyming scheme is very good. Good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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This is a very strong contest entry. I love the idea of an ode to this day, that's perfect. We should all be thankful for a new day. Your poem flowed well and the rhyming scheme is very good. Good luck.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much~Debbie
Comment from donaldww
An excellent ode for the day at hand. Appreciation for life grows when the pace of life slows, and we have time to create.
Good luck in the contest!
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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An excellent ode for the day at hand. Appreciation for life grows when the pace of life slows, and we have time to create.
Good luck in the contest!
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 23-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thanks so much, Donald. I appreciate your reviews~DEbbie
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Debbie, I truly enjoyed your mono-rhyme poem. Each verse was interestingly worded and the message in each was distinctive. The last verse is neat.
Appreciation of life grows, when the pace which we live in slows. Sitting quietly in repose, artistic works I will compose. Good job, Carolyn
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Debbie, I truly enjoyed your mono-rhyme poem. Each verse was interestingly worded and the message in each was distinctive. The last verse is neat.
Appreciation of life grows, when the pace which we live in slows. Sitting quietly in repose, artistic works I will compose. Good job, Carolyn
Comment Written 22-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much~Debbie
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
Happy to see your positive attitudes being converted into creative productions that a picture positive. This is a very special write and you are to be complimented for having the spirit to write it. I wish you the very best in the contest. Your friend, Bob
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Happy to see your positive attitudes being converted into creative productions that a picture positive. This is a very special write and you are to be complimented for having the spirit to write it. I wish you the very best in the contest. Your friend, Bob
Comment Written 22-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much, my friend. Glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debbie,
anything positive to me is great and better still when the words come from your heart ... The truth wrapped up in verse. To give thanks and be grateful, let the rest fall into place. Beautiful ode with a picture perfect scenery to pave the way. All the best for the contest and thank you for sharing this delight.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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Hi Debbie,
anything positive to me is great and better still when the words come from your heart ... The truth wrapped up in verse. To give thanks and be grateful, let the rest fall into place. Beautiful ode with a picture perfect scenery to pave the way. All the best for the contest and thank you for sharing this delight.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment Written 22-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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Thanks so very much, my friend. Life can be beautiful if you let it be. There were so many years I didn't realize that. Glad to be where I am today and very thankful for dear friends like you~Debbie
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Straight back at you with the exact words and thoughts... It's like we're in a parallel universe... So thankful! <~> James XX
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
YES THIS IS WELL WRITTEN MY FRIEND HOW MANY PEOPLE DO PRAISE THE DAY SOME FORGET HOW PRECIOUS TIME IS WELL DONE MY FRIEND REGARDS JILL
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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YES THIS IS WELL WRITTEN MY FRIEND HOW MANY PEOPLE DO PRAISE THE DAY SOME FORGET HOW PRECIOUS TIME IS WELL DONE MY FRIEND REGARDS JILL
Comment Written 22-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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Thanks so very much, Jill~Debbie
Comment from alexgeorge
Oh, Debbie. You are so right, my friend. When we do find some precious time to slow down and just breathe, we can be very appreciative of our surroundings and our creative spirit soars.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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Oh, Debbie. You are so right, my friend. When we do find some precious time to slow down and just breathe, we can be very appreciative of our surroundings and our creative spirit soars.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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Definitely. Thank you so much~Debbie
Comment from tedanytime
The wish is one that should be used often...enjoying the serenity of a day.
There are those who say time speeds up when you get older...I am convinced that it our brain that slows down, so that it only appears that time is passing quickly.
"Appreciation of life grows
When the pace which we live in slows"
I wholeheartedly agree!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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The wish is one that should be used often...enjoying the serenity of a day.
There are those who say time speeds up when you get older...I am convinced that it our brain that slows down, so that it only appears that time is passing quickly.
"Appreciation of life grows
When the pace which we live in slows"
I wholeheartedly agree!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Oh is it not more than true, we get so busy we just simply don't have time to enjoy the good things in our lives. God in His mercy sometimes allows things that slow our pace so we can see what we are missing. Great piece and thought. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Oh is it not more than true, we get so busy we just simply don't have time to enjoy the good things in our lives. God in His mercy sometimes allows things that slow our pace so we can see what we are missing. Great piece and thought. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thanks so much, my friend~Debbie