Comment from Liz Dunbee

Excellent

This is a precious verse. Your rhyming is excellent and the poem flows very well. The picture is perfect for these lovely words. Well done on a charming verse.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Hey Liz, thank you for the review.I find I write a lot of poems based on my family.I thank God for them daily.

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

An Acrostic full of warmth with feelings
that come from the heart of a mother
as she looks and writes of her baby
boy who lies in her arms, a feeling
like no other on earth.
Well done

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Thank you for your review and kind words. As a mother of three boys I am very blessed.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

CONGRATULATIONS!! Three boys!! Ouch!!!...I have a daughter and a son. One boy was enough.. LOL I am so happy for you and you husband. Health to all!! Luff Linda xoo

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Thank you for your review and kind words.I am blessed with three sons