thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Gods Healing Grace"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
7 total reviews
Comment from simonbagh
Telling everyone about God above
About his Mercy,Grace and Love.
How He sent His Son to die for our sins,
How He offers forgiveness if we just let Him in.
Just telling is not enough, as Jesus says, He says,
" the sort of every tree is known by the fruit that it bears"
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Telling everyone about God above
About his Mercy,Grace and Love.
How He sent His Son to die for our sins,
How He offers forgiveness if we just let Him in.
Just telling is not enough, as Jesus says, He says,
" the sort of every tree is known by the fruit that it bears"
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Thank you for you review,
Comment from Liz Dunbee
I love your little verses. This one is full of hope and love. Your choice of subject is excellent and the rhyming is good. Well done on an uplifting piece.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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I love your little verses. This one is full of hope and love. Your choice of subject is excellent and the rhyming is good. Well done on an uplifting piece.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review,Though it was hard going through it all with my son. God had a plan for his life,It has taught me to trust him always.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
God's healing grace is truly exemplified, dire faith in God is exposed, a child with brain cancer was healed 33 years ago, act of forgiveness and saviour of life all faithfully acknowledged, simply inspiring. 09/830
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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God's healing grace is truly exemplified, dire faith in God is exposed, a child with brain cancer was healed 33 years ago, act of forgiveness and saviour of life all faithfully acknowledged, simply inspiring. 09/830
Comment Written 30-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review.God is good,I have come to trust him in all things in life,He knows what is best for us.
Comment from shortwerks
Hi. I don't know if this is about your experience or if you are just very good at making it seem real, but either way, very touching piece.
My idea for improvement in general would be to simply add another couple of lines about the ordeal at the darkest times to allow us to more specifically experience it with you.
A couple of specific suggestions: I would change "the child who has cancer" to "the child who had cancer" unless I am totally misreading the story. I would also make punctuation consistent throughout. Adding a period at the end of the third line, a comma after line eight, and a period after the last line.
That's all from me. Thanks so much for letting me read your sweet poem.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Hi. I don't know if this is about your experience or if you are just very good at making it seem real, but either way, very touching piece.
My idea for improvement in general would be to simply add another couple of lines about the ordeal at the darkest times to allow us to more specifically experience it with you.
A couple of specific suggestions: I would change "the child who has cancer" to "the child who had cancer" unless I am totally misreading the story. I would also make punctuation consistent throughout. Adding a period at the end of the third line, a comma after line eight, and a period after the last line.
That's all from me. Thanks so much for letting me read your sweet poem.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Hi Shortwerks,First let me say thank you for your review,and suggestions on correcting my punctuation.I am thankful.As for my child he still has a massive tumor in between the two halves of the brain.DR.S can,t explain it.People with this type of cancer don,t live very long.God knows what he is doing.And I thank him every day. For he is good.And he is using my son in a special way.
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Blessings to you and your son. He sounds like a walking miracle.
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I just saw the message about your generous nomination re my reviewing and the pump gift. Thank you so much! You made my day.
Peace.
Comment from JennaG
This is a beautiful poem with a powerful message! I was so happy to read that your son is alive and doing well. It's neat that he's using his experience to inspire others to find hope in God. Very well written and a true pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing! :)
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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This is a beautiful poem with a powerful message! I was so happy to read that your son is alive and doing well. It's neat that he's using his experience to inspire others to find hope in God. Very well written and a true pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing! :)
Comment Written 30-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review,and kind words.It is pretty cool how God is using him to inspire others.
Comment from songbyrd
Beautiful..I know all too well with the advocacy work we do, the pain of a sick child..Don't know how people make it without the Lord as a comfort..
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Beautiful..I know all too well with the advocacy work we do, the pain of a sick child..Don't know how people make it without the Lord as a comfort..
Comment Written 30-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review,I don't know what I would do if God was not in control of our lives.To God be the glory
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi s.m.kirby,
This work holds not only deep pain but the power of your faith to guide and hope. Wonderful message in this one. Your post not only shares your thoughts it also shares hope for the future.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
Maureen
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Hi s.m.kirby,
This work holds not only deep pain but the power of your faith to guide and hope. Wonderful message in this one. Your post not only shares your thoughts it also shares hope for the future.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
Maureen
Comment Written 30-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Hi Maureen thank you for your review,My hope is in the Lord,Thanks for the good luck wish I need it.After being a member here I have read some beautiful poetry.hope you have a good night sandy
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Hi Maureen thank you for your review,My hope is in the Lord,Thanks for the good luck wish I need it.After being a member here I have read some beautiful poetry.hope you have a good night sandy
