Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Sexual Comedy"My book of poems and stories
7 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
secretive, robust, short , sharp.
Well done..hope it does well in the competition.
Good usage of the form, and to the point.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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secretive, robust, short , sharp.
Well done..hope it does well in the competition.
Good usage of the form, and to the point.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 20-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you for reviewing my poem and for your comments. I appreciate the review.
Comment from denhagan
Well, this is definitely the shortest poem I have ever seen or read (or actually not had to read). Very creative idea to have nothing. Beautiful picture.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Well, this is definitely the shortest poem I have ever seen or read (or actually not had to read). Very creative idea to have nothing. Beautiful picture.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your review. This was written for the ABC contest and following the sample it was supposed to be short so since this is my first poem to be submitted I followed suit. I don't know how to change background or type yet but intend on learning. May I look at some of your works?
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You're welcome. When I reviewed your poem, there was only a picture with no words at all. I see that it has words, now, but it doesn't need a mature rating. Yes, you may look at my works. Welcome to FanStory, :0)
Dennis
Comment from Eigle Rull
Ha! This was perfect! A sexual comedy it is. But does it need to be classified under a shade of adultness? It think now. Bring it out into the open where others can enjoy the humor of it too. This is excellent. It's the easiest reading I've even done.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Ha! This was perfect! A sexual comedy it is. But does it need to be classified under a shade of adultness? It think now. Bring it out into the open where others can enjoy the humor of it too. This is excellent. It's the easiest reading I've even done.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 04-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your review. This was written for the ABC contest and following the sample it was supposed to be short so since this is my first poem to be submitted I followed suit. I don't know how to change background or type yet but intend on learning. May I look at some of your works?
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You are very welcome top check out any of my work. Please feel free at any time.
Always with respect,
Comment from reconciled
Anne, would love to review this...but truly can not see it...fix it and I well return...your print needs to be darker...love Michael
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Anne, would love to review this...but truly can not see it...fix it and I well return...your print needs to be darker...love Michael
Comment Written 04-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your review. This was written for the ABC contest and following the sample it was supposed to be short so since this is my first poem to be submitted I followed suit. I don't know how to change background or type yet but intend on learning. May I look at some of your works?
Comment from Gungalo
You need too make you font darker and your background lighter. You don't have any reviews because they can't read this. Come back to me when you have fixed it for a better review. I could read it but because I highlighted it.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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You need too make you font darker and your background lighter. You don't have any reviews because they can't read this. Come back to me when you have fixed it for a better review. I could read it but because I highlighted it.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your review. This was written for the ABC contest and following the sample it was supposed to be short so since this is my first poem to be submitted I followed suit. I don't know how to change background or type yet but intend on learning. May I look at some of your works?
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Sure go right ahead girl.
Comment from SteveY
Well, I'm not sure how to rate this because when it appeared on my screen there were no words written, just the picture, but then again maybe that's the point of it all. So I'm still giving it a five!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Well, I'm not sure how to rate this because when it appeared on my screen there were no words written, just the picture, but then again maybe that's the point of it all. So I'm still giving it a five!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your review. This was written for the ABC contest and following the sample it was supposed to be short so since this is my first poem to be submitted I followed suit. I don't know how to change background or type yet but intend on learning. May I look at some of your works?
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You can absolutely look at my works any time you want. I hope you enjoy. You'll get the hang of that background stuff very soon. I struggled with it too when I first started:)
Comment from ElegantButler
As I was clever enough to highlight the area I was able to read the poem. And I did so with much amusement. The simple naughtiness of the poem speaks of debauchery as fluently as the great ribald poems of ages past.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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As I was clever enough to highlight the area I was able to read the poem. And I did so with much amusement. The simple naughtiness of the poem speaks of debauchery as fluently as the great ribald poems of ages past.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your rating. Since this is my first entry I was hesitant to submit it at all. You have given me enough self confidence to try more. Thanks again.