Creepy Poems
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Where it belongs! What a brilliant limerick, said with the right amount of distaste to that particular type of low life. Well done, Treischel. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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Where it belongs! What a brilliant limerick, said with the right amount of distaste to that particular type of low life. Well done, Treischel. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 05-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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Thank you Sandra. I hate those types.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Tom, Tom ... my lips twitched when I came to the end of your limerick!
I wonder if there is some discreet, civilized way of dealing with these dope sellers once and for all....
How times have changed, as the subject of your limerick testifies! :)
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Tom, Tom ... my lips twitched when I came to the end of your limerick!
I wonder if there is some discreet, civilized way of dealing with these dope sellers once and for all....
How times have changed, as the subject of your limerick testifies! :)
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you Sonali. Yes, when I was young there wasn't much of it around.
Comment from 9999pool
Drug peddlers are the devils and evil of society.
Many life have been lost, destroyed and even sacrificed for a mere wealth that is hardly justified.
The damage and destruction of lives is poignant.
Their souls should be burn in hell.
Great write and well penned a message of the ills and cruelty of drug taking.
cheerio, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Drug peddlers are the devils and evil of society.
Many life have been lost, destroyed and even sacrificed for a mere wealth that is hardly justified.
The damage and destruction of lives is poignant.
Their souls should be burn in hell.
Great write and well penned a message of the ills and cruelty of drug taking.
cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you Ritchie, glad we are in agreement.
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Welcome, cheerio, Ritchie. :)).
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
There once was a drug dealer, Jardell.
Got filthy rich from pills that he'd sell. LOVE: filthy rich
Many kids would get high.
While some others would die.
Now forever, his soul burns in Hell.
CONSIDER: May the dope peddler's soul burn in Hell.
Regards:
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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There once was a drug dealer, Jardell.
Got filthy rich from pills that he'd sell. LOVE: filthy rich
Many kids would get high.
While some others would die.
Now forever, his soul burns in Hell.
CONSIDER: May the dope peddler's soul burn in Hell.
Regards:
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thanks Stephen. Good thought, since it's not a sure thing. He could be saved, but I like the stronger statement.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Drug dealers especially those who prey on the young are the lowest of the low just slightly above child sex offenders. Well written limerick.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Drug dealers especially those who prey on the young are the lowest of the low just slightly above child sex offenders. Well written limerick.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you Teresa. My sentiments exactly.
Comment from Capricorn30
A heavy price to be paid when one involves himself and others in illicit materials;
A well-penned limerick which sends an imperative message.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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A heavy price to be paid when one involves himself and others in illicit materials;
A well-penned limerick which sends an imperative message.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you Margaret.
