Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Good use of abcb rhyming
good alliteration and assonance in sticky stinky
Excellent humor in this poem about Halloween treats, sure to please children :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013

Thanks Brooke for your review and comments, I know the children in my class loved it.

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013

Thanks Brooke for your review and comments, I know the children in my class loved it.

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

I'm a happy baker, Indeed that's a very beautiful expressed
Childrens poem for Halloween, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Lakeport

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2013

Thank you for your review and am glad you enjoyed it I had a lot of fun with it in my class.

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2013

Thank you for your review and am glad you enjoyed it I had a lot of fun with it in my class.

reply by lakeport on 14-Sep-2013

your welcome.Lakeport.

reply by lakeport on 14-Sep-2013

your welcome.Lakeport.

Comment from Sueellen11

Excellent

Ha ha wicked recipe, this is a great fun poem for kids, you have met the contest requirement, great little write here, good luck, blessings, sueellen

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013

thanks, I work with children and the ones in my class last year loved it .thank you for the review

Comment from Supe

Excellent

How cute is this? I loved it and I love the fast pace from start to finish. You did a nice job on this contest entry. I am going to share this with my kids after school today. Nice job.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013

Thanks for your review and I hope your children enjoy as much as the children in my class did BLESSINGS

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Thanks very much for entering my contest, s.m.kirby.

However, you haven't followed the rule of stating the poem's total words, and the number of your fans, at the top of the poem under 'description'. I'd be grateful if you'd do so immediately, as it's not eligible for the contest as it is.

Many thanks, and good luck, Ted

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013

Sorry thanks for letting me know I went back and made the change. Have a great day.

reply by Domino 2 on 11-Sep-2013

Thanks for that. Ted

Comment from Liz Dunbee

Excellent

This is quite scary but very funny. Reminds me a bit of the Pied Piper. I think children will find this fun. Your rhymes are great and I think you have produced an excellent poem.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013

Good morning Liz, thank you for your review,I know the children in my class enjoyed it last year.I made finger cookies to go with it and dressed as a baker we had fun.

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem that's perfect for kids and little children on halloween. Wonderful picture to bring out all the scary stuff!

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013

Thank you for reading and your review,The children in my class love it.

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013

Thank you for reading and your review,The children in my class love it.

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

This is a slightly dark Kids Rhymed Poetry writing prompt entry that would scare the bajeebers out of me. LOL But, say no to my feet. UUggghhh. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013

Thanks for your review,The children in my class loved it

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013

Thanks for your review,The children in my class loved it

Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart

Excellent

Oh this is definitely a poem children would truly enjoy. I love the yummy looking cupcakes too. I saw some real cute little mice made out of hershey's kisses last week. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013

Thank you for your review I wrote this last year for my class because my boss wanted us to dress up. I had a lot of fun with it. Blessings, Sandy

Comment from lindalcreel

Excellent

Somehow this reminds me of the movie about Hansel and Gretel that I just watched. She was a baker too, but she used all types of body parts to add flavor to her creations. I remember the marshmallow peanuts and who doesn't love a good cupcake. Great job! Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013

Thank you for your review and kind words I used this last year in my class. My children loved it. Blessings

reply by lindalcreel on 10-Sep-2013

Welcome:)