Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "Why Was It My Brothers Time To Die?"My book of poems and stories
9 total reviews
Comment from Sueellen11
Oh my sweet Annie,, I am so sorry for your great loss,,, I know words wont help just yet,, for your loss is great and time is need to grieve,,, but luv,,, your bother is resting so peacefully in the loving arms of GOD,, and in time,,, GOD will dry your tears,, mending the ache I thin your heart,,, and He will send wonderful loving memories you both shared,,, Annie,, it helps to write,,talk and remember him to all,,,I am sorry,,blessings to you,,hugs sueellen
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Oh my sweet Annie,, I am so sorry for your great loss,,, I know words wont help just yet,, for your loss is great and time is need to grieve,,, but luv,,, your bother is resting so peacefully in the loving arms of GOD,, and in time,,, GOD will dry your tears,, mending the ache I thin your heart,,, and He will send wonderful loving memories you both shared,,, Annie,, it helps to write,,talk and remember him to all,,,I am sorry,,blessings to you,,hugs sueellen
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much for your comments and review. I really appreciate them.
Comment from Louise Michelle
I am so sorry for the loss of your brother. Thank God the murderer was caught and is now in prison. Your poem is beautiful and your message very important. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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I am so sorry for the loss of your brother. Thank God the murderer was caught and is now in prison. Your poem is beautiful and your message very important. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
AnnieDawn,
I feel for you and your family to have suffered such a huge loss. I can't even imagine how awful that must be.
Good rhyming couplets that convey the essence of your pain, and invoke emotion in the reader.
I especially liked your last line ... "He is free from all his pain". That is a nice thought for you and your family to hang on to.
Well done!
Spag: In your title "Brothers Time" should read Brother's Time. And in the 4th stanza "full of live" should read full of life.
Regardless, a very good poem.
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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AnnieDawn,
I feel for you and your family to have suffered such a huge loss. I can't even imagine how awful that must be.
Good rhyming couplets that convey the essence of your pain, and invoke emotion in the reader.
I especially liked your last line ... "He is free from all his pain". That is a nice thought for you and your family to hang on to.
Well done!
Spag: In your title "Brothers Time" should read Brother's Time. And in the 4th stanza "full of live" should read full of life.
Regardless, a very good poem.
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your review of my poem.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is an age old question I too have asked and you have to believe. I lost my twin sons and their wives to a car train accident their age 26. Left three gramdbaboes--3 months, three years, five years. I hated God for years.
Good writing
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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This is an age old question I too have asked and you have to believe. I lost my twin sons and their wives to a car train accident their age 26. Left three gramdbaboes--3 months, three years, five years. I hated God for years.
Good writing
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your review of my poem.
Comment from allborn66
This is a very meaningful poem. Death is often difficult to explain. I like the way you express your theme. I feel the tone is appropriate to the subject matter. The picture is a good choice.
Barbara
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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This is a very meaningful poem. Death is often difficult to explain. I like the way you express your theme. I feel the tone is appropriate to the subject matter. The picture is a good choice.
Barbara
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your review of my poem.
Comment from steevie
What a sad and sobering write. I could feel the devastation whilst reading the lines and I'm sure as you wrote this, your eyes were filled with tears and unimaginable sadness and grief.
My thoughts and prayers are with you, Annie.
Be strong
and have faith
smiles
steve
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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What a sad and sobering write. I could feel the devastation whilst reading the lines and I'm sure as you wrote this, your eyes were filled with tears and unimaginable sadness and grief.
My thoughts and prayers are with you, Annie.
Be strong
and have faith
smiles
steve
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your review of my poem.
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you're very welcome, Anne
steve
Comment from denhagan
This is a nice poem, written in the free verse style in couplets with good rhythm, about the author's brother. In the fourth couplet, should be "life" not "live". Nice poem.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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This is a nice poem, written in the free verse style in couplets with good rhythm, about the author's brother. In the fourth couplet, should be "life" not "live". Nice poem.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your review of my poem.
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You're welcome,
Dennis
Comment from daeneam
A prayer for his soul. Thank God they found the perpetrator. Here in our country, there are so many unsolved cases and the worst thing is, we got a terrible justice system. Victims always look forward for positive results, yet there are none.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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A prayer for his soul. Thank God they found the perpetrator. Here in our country, there are so many unsolved cases and the worst thing is, we got a terrible justice system. Victims always look forward for positive results, yet there are none.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for your review. I appreciate all comments.
Comment from Samuel Dickens
The pain is palpable as you ask these tough questions, and it's something I can relate to very much. I lost my younger brother in 2007.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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The pain is palpable as you ask these tough questions, and it's something I can relate to very much. I lost my younger brother in 2007.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your review.