thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Gods Grace"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
7 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
God's Grace - I added the apostrophe for possessive
good rhyming couplets including good proximate rhyming
good consonance in offer forgiveness
good alliteration in sinner saved
you express your beliefs with conviction in this poem of faith :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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God's Grace - I added the apostrophe for possessive
good rhyming couplets including good proximate rhyming
good consonance in offer forgiveness
good alliteration in sinner saved
you express your beliefs with conviction in this poem of faith :-) Brooke
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Brooke Thank you for reviewing and comments on my poem God's grace,To him be the glory.Sandy
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
This is a lovely poem...all you have to do is add a chorus and it would make an awesome song. Tag teaming with Miss Evelyn as she is in a rehab center with a broken hip and no computer. God loves you and so do we.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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This is a lovely poem...all you have to do is add a chorus and it would make an awesome song. Tag teaming with Miss Evelyn as she is in a rehab center with a broken hip and no computer. God loves you and so do we.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Thank you for you review and kind words tell Evelyn I said thnks and will keep her in my prayers.Blessings
Comment from Sueellen11
Oh well done,,, this is perfect. Grace, GOD's gift,,, to us all,,, I am a sinner also saved by grace,,, every day our lives are full of grace,, even non believers,,,, if only they could see the grace in life,,, just waking to a new day is GOD's first gift of grace to us daily,,,, great entry into the contest,,,, good luck,,, blessings,,, sueellen
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Oh well done,,, this is perfect. Grace, GOD's gift,,, to us all,,, I am a sinner also saved by grace,,, every day our lives are full of grace,, even non believers,,,, if only they could see the grace in life,,, just waking to a new day is GOD's first gift of grace to us daily,,,, great entry into the contest,,,, good luck,,, blessings,,, sueellen
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your review and kind words, yes every day God shows us his grace and I am thankful for it.
Comment from Jean Lutz
There are many ways to tell the sacred story. Your words are well chosen and fulfills the Great Commission. Your selected artwork compliments as well.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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There are many ways to tell the sacred story. Your words are well chosen and fulfills the Great Commission. Your selected artwork compliments as well.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Thank you for you review and complement Hope you have a blessed day.
Comment from harmony13
An excellent poem! The poem flowed and connected well.
The author conveyed deep meaning of God's Grace. The poem was thought provoking and the reader found it creative.
The artwork was perfect and complimented the read.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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An excellent poem! The poem flowed and connected well.
The author conveyed deep meaning of God's Grace. The poem was thought provoking and the reader found it creative.
The artwork was perfect and complimented the read.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Harmony, thank you for your review and nice complements I am thankful God bless
Comment from c_lucas
"There but for the Grace of God go I." This is very well written with a smooth flow of words making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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"There but for the Grace of God go I." This is very well written with a smooth flow of words making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your review and kind words God bless
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You're welcome, s.m. Charlie
Comment from brentman99
A nice poem with a good picture. I have a couple of suggestions and points that may have made it even better - use or discard as you see fit.
"Born of sin nature from Adam and Eve" - I suggest "Born in nature, of sin from Adam and Eve."
"Through Jesus he saves us from hell" - I suggest "Through Jesus, he surely saves as from Hell" (Hell is seen as a place, so I would have capitalised it).
"For his mercy, GRACE and love." While it works, it is kind of hitting the reader over the head saying, "See! This is what my poem is about!" I got it without the emphasis.
Overall, a good poem. Good luck, Brent.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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A nice poem with a good picture. I have a couple of suggestions and points that may have made it even better - use or discard as you see fit.
"Born of sin nature from Adam and Eve" - I suggest "Born in nature, of sin from Adam and Eve."
"Through Jesus he saves us from hell" - I suggest "Through Jesus, he surely saves as from Hell" (Hell is seen as a place, so I would have capitalised it).
"For his mercy, GRACE and love." While it works, it is kind of hitting the reader over the head saying, "See! This is what my poem is about!" I got it without the emphasis.
Overall, a good poem. Good luck, Brent.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Brent thank you for your review and helpful suggestions, I was unable to make changes in time for I am not able to get on this computer as often as I would like.God bless
