thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "He is so sweet"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
6 total reviews
Comment from Sueellen11
This is one lovely poem,,,, what. A Beautiful happy baby,,, nanas pride and joy i can see,,,yes all those kisses and lots more to come,,,look at that big beautiful smile,,, beautiful, thanks for sharing your grandson with us,,,blessings,,sueellen
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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This is one lovely poem,,,, what. A Beautiful happy baby,,, nanas pride and joy i can see,,,yes all those kisses and lots more to come,,,look at that big beautiful smile,,, beautiful, thanks for sharing your grandson with us,,,blessings,,sueellen
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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thanks for reading and reviewing my poem about my grandson'yes he is my pride and joy .Blessings sandy
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thanks for reading and reviewing my poem about my grandson'yes he is my pride and joy .Blessings sandy
Comment from Liz Dunbee
I loved reading this cheerful little poem. You are right grandchildren are a gift from God. Your little one looks so happy. I can imagine him laughing with all those kisses. Well done on good rhyming and a nice flow of words.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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I loved reading this cheerful little poem. You are right grandchildren are a gift from God. Your little one looks so happy. I can imagine him laughing with all those kisses. Well done on good rhyming and a nice flow of words.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Liz, Thank you for reviewing my poem about my grandson,I am crazy about him.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Sandy, your love for your grandson shines brightly in this work. Great emotion and expressive work. It made me smile - wonderfully penned :)
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Dear Sandy, your love for your grandson shines brightly in this work. Great emotion and expressive work. It made me smile - wonderfully penned :)
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Maureen, Thank you for reviewing my poem about my grandson.I am crazy about him.
Comment from Ducorse
A very gentle and touching poem. I enjoyed it very much. There is something about a baby that just attracts kisses.
Thank you for a wonderful read.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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A very gentle and touching poem. I enjoyed it very much. There is something about a baby that just attracts kisses.
Thank you for a wonderful read.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you for reviewing my poem.Yes all babies are sweet
Comment from Gungalo
A beautiful write for your first grandson. You sound so very very carried away girl. Wonderful isn't it? I love this:
I give him kisses
under his chin.
He laughs and laughs
So I do it again.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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A beautiful write for your first grandson. You sound so very very carried away girl. Wonderful isn't it? I love this:
I give him kisses
under his chin.
He laughs and laughs
So I do it again.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Gunalo, Thank you for reviewing my poem about my grandson,I guess I do get carried away with him.
Comment from Sylvia Page
Hello,
What a wonderful and sweet poem for your grandchild. I am sure he must be a bundle of joy to you. I know the feeling, mine is 4 years now and he is growing too fast!
No faults. Good rhyme and rhythm.
Cheers,
Sylvia
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Hello,
What a wonderful and sweet poem for your grandchild. I am sure he must be a bundle of joy to you. I know the feeling, mine is 4 years now and he is growing too fast!
No faults. Good rhyme and rhythm.
Cheers,
Sylvia
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Sylvia Thank you for reviewing my poem about my grandson,he is a joy.I teach the four year old class at work,love that age,Blessings Sandy
