Creepy Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Halloween Night"A touch of Fear
15 total reviews
Comment from mystery poet
OOOOOO!!!!!!! This is deliciously errie, even
a bit scary and gets one in the mood for the
upcoming celebration...Glad you remind us to
have those treats readily available for the
little goolies at the door or eles...That why
it is call 'Trick or Treat', right? Best to
you in the acrostic contest!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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OOOOOO!!!!!!! This is deliciously errie, even
a bit scary and gets one in the mood for the
upcoming celebration...Glad you remind us to
have those treats readily available for the
little goolies at the door or eles...That why
it is call 'Trick or Treat', right? Best to
you in the acrostic contest!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much Mystery poet, yes indeed, that is the essence.
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Essence is a must and this has plenty.
Good luck, my friend...go get 'um!
LOL::}}Joyce
Comment from 9999pool
In a world of make-believe where Halloween unfolds into a night of silent mystery and costumes are adorned to pretend we are the ghosts and bad devils out to make a terrible horrifying joke on someone. On Halloween Nights, the skies is the limit on a chance to prance a joke at someone unsuspecting.
Though the initiation of Halloween a long time ago had been forgotten, many still enjoyed it today as a time to play zombies, ghosts and devils fro a few days and with no ill will or evil intend. This is just a fun celebration to lighten our hearts and souls.
Great write and well penned. Well done.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Have a great and wonderful Sunday!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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In a world of make-believe where Halloween unfolds into a night of silent mystery and costumes are adorned to pretend we are the ghosts and bad devils out to make a terrible horrifying joke on someone. On Halloween Nights, the skies is the limit on a chance to prance a joke at someone unsuspecting.
Though the initiation of Halloween a long time ago had been forgotten, many still enjoyed it today as a time to play zombies, ghosts and devils fro a few days and with no ill will or evil intend. This is just a fun celebration to lighten our hearts and souls.
Great write and well penned. Well done.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Have a great and wonderful Sunday!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you Ritchie. It is a a strange holiday.
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Can't agree with you more. But the kids loved scary stuff so let's enjoy this time of year with them, smiles.
Cheerio, Ritchie, :))
Comment from adewpearl
Stunning presentation of your poem
excellent alliteration in phrases like howling horrors, cold crypts, lurking with lust
strong rhymes
a solid acrostic for Halloween Night that captures the spirit of that night well :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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Stunning presentation of your poem
excellent alliteration in phrases like howling horrors, cold crypts, lurking with lust
strong rhymes
a solid acrostic for Halloween Night that captures the spirit of that night well :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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Thank you Brooke for a wonderful review.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is delightfully creepy and appropriate for Halloween. It is actually the first Halloween poem entry I have read so far. It made me think of the classic scary movies where more is suggested than seen.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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This is delightfully creepy and appropriate for Halloween. It is actually the first Halloween poem entry I have read so far. It made me think of the classic scary movies where more is suggested than seen.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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Thank you CrystieCookie.
Comment from songbyrd
And it definitely reads like it's Halloween Night. Your word choices, the image and even the lack and orange..everything works. Good acrostic entry!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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And it definitely reads like it's Halloween Night. Your word choices, the image and even the lack and orange..everything works. Good acrostic entry!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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Thank you songbird. Maybe I'll get lucky this time!
Comment from Gungalo
Now prancing to the front door,
In costumes gaily festooned,
Gathering their treats galore,
Hell hides for chances attuned
To wreak woeful blood and gore.
Ooooh this is so scary Tom. At least for the little kids on Halloween Night. Good acrostic for Halloween Night.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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Now prancing to the front door,
In costumes gaily festooned,
Gathering their treats galore,
Hell hides for chances attuned
To wreak woeful blood and gore.
Ooooh this is so scary Tom. At least for the little kids on Halloween Night. Good acrostic for Halloween Night.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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Thank you Gungalo. A sweet review on trick or treats.
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Smile.
Comment from Capricorn30
A well-penned Halloween acrostic;
Good alliteration incorporated throughout: "Howling Horrors" to introduce readers to the holiday unlike most others;
A spooky writing to frighten children and adults alike.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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A well-penned Halloween acrostic;
Good alliteration incorporated throughout: "Howling Horrors" to introduce readers to the holiday unlike most others;
A spooky writing to frighten children and adults alike.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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Thank you Margaret.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
This is a good acrostic poem meeting requirement that each line start with a letter of title of the poem. It uses figurative language to create images.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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This is a good acrostic poem meeting requirement that each line start with a letter of title of the poem. It uses figurative language to create images.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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Thank you Preston.
Comment from sunnilicious
You managed rhymes into a narrative acrostic. Creative with plenty horror and thriller visuals presented. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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You managed rhymes into a narrative acrostic. Creative with plenty horror and thriller visuals presented. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious for the review and the best wishes.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A very cleverly written Acrostic poem which embraces the concept of Halloween beautifully.
The overall presentation is well prepared and suits the poem perfectly.
Good use of alliteration in howling horrors and hell hides.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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A very cleverly written Acrostic poem which embraces the concept of Halloween beautifully.
The overall presentation is well prepared and suits the poem perfectly.
Good use of alliteration in howling horrors and hell hides.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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Thank you Shirley.
