Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Scarily cute ... a paradox, of course, but the BOO was so sweet!

Ghosties and ghoulies and long legged beasties ..!

:)

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013

Thank you Sonali. Yes, Boo!

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

Halloween through a wee little one's eyes where tree shadows can seem menacing, probably a child at the night light stage. Like that your final word is boo.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013

Thank you ravenblack. Just a bit of holiday spirit, or should I say spirits.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Just a child... I think everyone in the family could run scared with that scenario. Creative with good visual imagery. Good poetic form. Great work!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013

Thank you sunnilicious, you make me smile.

Comment from Sueellen11

Excellent

My friend,,, this is one excellent nonet,, imagery perfect,, very smooth flow through out,,, correct count,, well done. Great read,,,blessing, sueellen

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013

Thank you Sueellen.

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

This is so very well done and I feel it sums up the
darker side of Halloween.
Hey! I'm sure it's not only children who can be scared on this night. I'm sure I could be.lol.
A perfect Nonet and a stellar presentation.
Worthy oof a six but... I don't have one.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013

Thank you Shirley. I'm fine with a virtual six on your words.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent poem. It adheres to the nonet format. It has good rhyme and flow. It has good figurative language that paints good images appropriate for Halloween.
Preston

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013

Thanks Preston.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hah, BOO yourself, Mr. 'T'!

This was an excellent nonet, so perfect for this time of the year. Ghoulies and ghosties abound, and I love it, HA HA!

Again, fantastic job!

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013

Thank you Dean. Right up your alley, it is.

reply by Dean Kuch on 18-Oct-2013

Heh, yes, it certainly is...

Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

A perfect Nonet for this time of year.
Casting doubt and fear to those that are alienated from all forms of hysteria and gruesome figures.
Charlene

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013

Thank you Charlene.

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

You are right, I did get the Halloween sitters. Thia Real spooky picture, enhances the words. I enjoyed the poem. Real nice nonet. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013

Thank you Cajungirl.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Ha,ha. It delivers, the arrow.

Love the theme, love the experience. Love the Boo at the end.


One for the festival.

I hope it doesn't scare anyone too much.

A good write.

RGstar

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013

Thank you RGstar. Just a bit of fun.