Creepy Poems
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9 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
This pantoum poem came out great. You are lyrical with rythm, rhymes and repeats. Creative with great visual imagery. Nice work. Excellent.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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This pantoum poem came out great. You are lyrical with rythm, rhymes and repeats. Creative with great visual imagery. Nice work. Excellent.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thanks again Sunni.
Comment from Sueellen11
Excellent,,, your imagery so vivid,,, I remember going into the haunted train ride and house,,, will never forget how scared I was,,, I know today it was just a kid thing,,, but it left a small fear of the sorts of attractions,,, and a fear of enclosed space,,, great write,,, perfect all round poem,,blessings,,,sueellen
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Excellent,,, your imagery so vivid,,, I remember going into the haunted train ride and house,,, will never forget how scared I was,,, I know today it was just a kid thing,,, but it left a small fear of the sorts of attractions,,, and a fear of enclosed space,,, great write,,, perfect all round poem,,blessings,,,sueellen
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thank you Sueellen. I got the Muse while watching a local news program talking about one set up for this Halloween.
Comment from NicciFaye
I can't remember the last haunted house I traveled through...I think it was the house of horrors at Walt Disney World in Orlando. This is a awesome poem for this season!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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I can't remember the last haunted house I traveled through...I think it was the house of horrors at Walt Disney World in Orlando. This is a awesome poem for this season!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thank you Nicci.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Crazy-paying to be scared out of your wits.
A clever and well written pantoum poem.
A great style choice for this genre as the horror
images are re-inforced through repeated lines.
Well rhymed and presented.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Crazy-paying to be scared out of your wits.
A clever and well written pantoum poem.
A great style choice for this genre as the horror
images are re-inforced through repeated lines.
Well rhymed and presented.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thank you Shirley, it was a fun write.
Comment from trimple
Hey Tom
Been away for a while and come back to find you scaring the shite outa me ! :)
Clever poetry the pantoum, one that I am unable to ever get right. Good choice of image to accompany your halloween theme.
Looking again at the description in author's notes, you have executed this particular format spot on.
Pleasure to read and review
kind regards
trimple :)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Hey Tom
Been away for a while and come back to find you scaring the shite outa me ! :)
Clever poetry the pantoum, one that I am unable to ever get right. Good choice of image to accompany your halloween theme.
Looking again at the description in author's notes, you have executed this particular format spot on.
Pleasure to read and review
kind regards
trimple :)
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thank you trimple. Got to hear for you.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treschel,
This is an excellent poem which meets the line repetition requirements of the Pantoum form. It has good flow, rhyme scheme and figurative language. The repetition is effective.
Preston
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Hi, Treschel,
This is an excellent poem which meets the line repetition requirements of the Pantoum form. It has good flow, rhyme scheme and figurative language. The repetition is effective.
Preston
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Thanks Preston.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I nearly lost my head over this one, Treishel. Luckily, my staples held...
An excellent Pantoum, utilizing great rhyme and timing...
We frequent many haunts during the Halloween season. I'm not supposed to, due to my heart condition, but the allure is just to exciting.
Happy Halloween, my friend!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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I nearly lost my head over this one, Treishel. Luckily, my staples held...
An excellent Pantoum, utilizing great rhyme and timing...
We frequent many haunts during the Halloween season. I'm not supposed to, due to my heart condition, but the allure is just to exciting.
Happy Halloween, my friend!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Very clever Dean, thank you for that exciting review. Glad your staples held too!
Comment from Thatguypk
The Pantoum form works very well with this subject, the repeated lines adding emphasis to the feeling of fear and doom. A great poem for Halloween, and extremely well written, both in form and theme.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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The Pantoum form works very well with this subject, the repeated lines adding emphasis to the feeling of fear and doom. A great poem for Halloween, and extremely well written, both in form and theme.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Thank you Thatguypk.
Comment from Cookie333
I was always too afraid to partake of the haunted house ritual. I truly so not enjoy being frightened, I know some enjoy the suspense
Thank you and good luck
Karen
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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I was always too afraid to partake of the haunted house ritual. I truly so not enjoy being frightened, I know some enjoy the suspense
Thank you and good luck
Karen
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Thank you Karen. I never really enjoyed it either.
