Comment from Sueellen11

Excellent

How so very true is this,, I know for this big kid loves to get the flakes to land on my tongue too,,,great ode to winter,, excellent entry,,,well done,,good luck,,blessings sueellen

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2013

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Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. I used to love to eat snow. I would spend half the time with my mouth open. We used to be able to eat the snow off the ground too. I would not recommend that now. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2013

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Comment from rouskin

Excellent

Children love to have
Cold, wet snowflakes land upon
Their pink, waiting tongues.

A real life story
Good luck and be blessed

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013

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Comment from mfowler

Excellent

You don't get a lot of room to create an image in these teeny poems, but your image is delightful. It starts with a lovely simple, but sensuous image and completes it with a visually satisfying rejoinder. Good Luck!

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013

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Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

I know I always did, when I was a kid. Now, though, there's so much toxicity in rain water and snow, I'm not so sure.

To tell you the truth, though, when that first snow comes, I'll be right there, more than likely...tongue hanging out and all!

Nicely done. Best of luck to you in the contest...

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2013

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Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the open mouths that invite snowflakes in. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2013

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Comment from mroberts

Excellent

An excellent poem using the 575 form. A universal experiece at least for kids in colder climates. I like the sensual words and the great anticipation in " waiting tongues". The photo you've chosen is super.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2013

Thank you so very much for your review and kind comments.

Comment from denhagan

Excellent

This is a nice haiku poem for the winter contest. Has the correct syllable count for each line. Has a nice picture to accompany the poem.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2013

Thank you so very much for your review and kind comments.

reply by denhagan on 16-Nov-2013

You're welcome,
Dennis

Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

Author: haven't done that in years. . .good winter memory you have written along with appropriate picture. Good luck in the contest. livelylinda

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2013

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Comment from Cookie333

Excellent

Simply stated, a child's poem from an adult perspective...
I wish you luck in the contest and thank you for sharing your creation with us.
karen

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2013

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