Autumn
Taking a walk by the Arkansas River.3 total reviews
Comment from barkingdog
I like the verbs you use in your descriptions(leaves flicker and breezes cut.)
Nice 'l' consonance:
golden leaves flicker/fall
Your syllable count is perfect. Best of luck in the contest.
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I like the verbs you use in your descriptions(leaves flicker and breezes cut.)
Nice 'l' consonance:
golden leaves flicker/fall
Your syllable count is perfect. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2013
Comment from Capricorn30
Excellent!
A well-crafted metaphor incorporated into a autumn writing of great visual imagery;
The senses recognize seasonal changes, as we rapidly learn to adjust.
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Excellent!
A well-crafted metaphor incorporated into a autumn writing of great visual imagery;
The senses recognize seasonal changes, as we rapidly learn to adjust.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2013
Comment from donaldcolson
This is one of the better poems I have read in this format. I find it difficult to evaluate such brief works. But i9t is certainly seasonal. don
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This is one of the better poems I have read in this format. I find it difficult to evaluate such brief works. But i9t is certainly seasonal. don
Comment Written 15-Dec-2013
