Unrequited
A 5-7-5 Poem7 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Unrequited, indeed that'a very nice expressed 5/7/5 poem
Thanks for sharing it, good luck at the contest,God bless you.lakeport.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Unrequited, indeed that'a very nice expressed 5/7/5 poem
Thanks for sharing it, good luck at the contest,God bless you.lakeport.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much for the review and the good wishes!
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your welcome,lakeport.
Comment from nelliesellie
Unrequited love is very painful. It is a feeling with no where to go. You can breathe in but not out. The love quickly turns to ashes so you can breath Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Unrequited love is very painful. It is a feeling with no where to go. You can breathe in but not out. The love quickly turns to ashes so you can breath Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Thanks for the review and comments!
Comment from l.raven
that and a shattered heart...lost love is like a fire going out...and ashes are all that is left...very well said...and the perfect picture...
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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that and a shattered heart...lost love is like a fire going out...and ashes are all that is left...very well said...and the perfect picture...
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the review and the stars!
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You are so welcome...xxoo
Comment from Jean Lutz
So warm -- then so cold. Your words and picture work together well. The fireplace looks inviting especially since we are shivering in the southland. Best to you with the entry.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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So warm -- then so cold. Your words and picture work together well. The fireplace looks inviting especially since we are shivering in the southland. Best to you with the entry.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thanks for the review and the stars. I'm in Florida...shivering too!
Comment from Colette
Well done on this one, it is perfect. The words match
the picture and the feeling came through. I wish you
the very best in the contest.
Colette
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Well done on this one, it is perfect. The words match
the picture and the feeling came through. I wish you
the very best in the contest.
Colette
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thanks for the review and the good wishes!
Comment from Saikripa
Fantastic. All three lines, each word is contributing to a story completed in such small space. Best of luck for success. Syllable count is also perfect.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Fantastic. All three lines, each word is contributing to a story completed in such small space. Best of luck for success. Syllable count is also perfect.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the review and for wishing me luck!
Comment from Janie King
It amazes me how y'all can take such few words and make a complete thought, one that your reader can completely understand. Great job. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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It amazes me how y'all can take such few words and make a complete thought, one that your reader can completely understand. Great job. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thanks for the review and the blessing.