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5-7-5 (Zombie Porn)

Hey, c'mon! Zombies were people too, ya' know?

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Comment from nelliesellie
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I love the picture. The zombie would need some brains first. But you would have to teach him not to eat them. That would be hard. Then you would have to teach him not to eat the pretty girl. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
    Thank you, nelliesellie...
Comment from Izzieshakespeare
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There's a certain eeriness about this poem that I like. The concept of zombies using the internet is comical as well as a bit squeamish at the same time. Well-done!

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
    Thank you very much, Izzieshakespeare. I agree, thinking that zombies could surf the net, searching to get "lucky", does lean a bit towards the sick & demented. But, that's me all over, totally twisted, LOL...

    Thanks for the fantastic review!
Comment from Coonhollow
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This is amazing! You nailed it! You've successfully managed to paint an intense message in so few words that it dazzles!

I love it.

It needs nothing, nothing at all.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
    Thank you, my friend. I totally overhauled it and got it in mere seconds before the deadline. I'm very glad you liked it!
Comment from Shirley B
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Dear author, I enjoyed this witty poem. If I was a zombie, I guess that would be a perfect place to go to get brains. Best of luck to you in the contest, Shirley

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
    Thanks, Shirley. Much obliged!