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Memory Lane

Quatrains 10/10/10/10 abcb

15 total reviews 
Comment from donaldcolson
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Very good poem about memories. Its OK to dwell on unpleasant memories when there isa something to be learners by doing so. With memories it seems that some chill and others warmly sustain us. don

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Thank you for the kind review~Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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There is nothing better than family memories. Mine make me smile often. I really enjoyed reading your poem. It flowed smoothly.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Dear Debbie - our memories good and bad create who we are....nice strong images and a work to pause and reflect over. I thought you did a great job on it.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Thank you. Take care, my friend~~Debbie
Comment from JW
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There is no doubt that as we pass through each and every day that we need to remember that today is tomorrow's yesterday, and we shall never pass this way again.

Thanks for sharing this. JW

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2014
    Thank you. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Selina Stambi
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Today does hold tomorrow?s memories
Treasure this day and spend it living well AMEN!

I decided to make this my creed several years ago - life is so short, isn't it, Debbie?

A lovely poem.

Just one thing, though - the colour of the font hurt my eyes. Combined with the small size, I had to really strain to read. I wonder if this could be remedied?

Have a lovely week.

Love,
xxx

Sonali :)

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2014
    Thank you for your kind review and comments. I'll take a look at the font. Yes, life is just flying by. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment from kiwijenny
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Treasure this day and spend it living well....best advice

"Therefore do not be anxious about tomorrow, for tomorrow will be anxious for itself. Sufficient for the day is its own trouble.
Love your poem
God bless

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Thank you~Debbie
Comment from rouskin
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Very well penned poem with strong emotions and perfect ending:Today does hold tomorrow?s memories
Treasure this day and spend it living well

Perfect write. Blessings, Rouskin

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Thank you for the lovely review and stars. Glad you enjoyed~Debbie
Comment from Clancy25
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How beautiful. I took a walk down memory lane with you. You have a wonderful flow and free style movement in your writing. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
Comment from Darkhorse555
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these words drew in the mind so beautifully written Some days we decide to explore up there Searching the darkest corners of our mind excellently penned piece

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
Comment from dmt1967
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This is a nice poem sometimes all we got is our memories and even then its too painful to remember its easier to forget thank you for sharing my friend I hope you are well

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it~Debbie