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Fog

Limbo in mist

4 total reviews 
Comment from seaglass
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I find this rhyming pattern very interesting. I can't pretend to understand the meaning of the poem but the pattern of rhyming only the last word in the first line with the last word in the fourth, while no others rhyme, is unique. I had to read it several times to figure out hos it was rhyming.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
    Hi seaglass ,
    thanks for the cool thoughts and review.
    I really appreciate the effort spent in review.
    cheers
    grant
Comment from Kingsland
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Some times we need to feel pain to know that we're alive. I liked the emotions you have written into this poetic thought process. This was a well written and I was entertained while reading it... John

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
    Hey there John,
    great to see you again mate. (been a long time )
    Thanks for your patronage and the time spent leaving your thoughts.
    cheers
    grant
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
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Oh Mr. Grunty it is always a pleasure to see your name and your glorious muse come to visit. I love the way this one flows and how you laid it out. I was stumbling a bit on in hope to quest of why...not sure that is exactly worded right but can't seem to find any other way. I think it is the of why, maybe I hear the way. I don't know. Love the poem though, always you have that tingle of hurt. Wish that would go away love.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
    Hey hon,
    great to see you!
    Thanks for having a look my friend. x
    hugs
    grant
Comment from Visheshta Dahiya
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a great poem on fog..!!
the simple and apt words through out the poem make the poem very interesting
best wishes
Visheshta

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
    Hi there Visheshta,
    thanks for the review!
    It is appreciated.
    cheers
    Grant
reply by Visheshta Dahiya on 06-Mar-2014
    welcome :)