Comment from rouskin

Excellent

I love it all but especially this part:And God says love your neighbor.You don't need words for that..find someone who's lonesome,sit down and have a chat.

Nice contest entry Best of luck and be blessed

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Thank you for your kind words.

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

I am in total agreement with you, it costs nothing to smile and help others in need, besides one's own family. Your poem had nice imagery and you made good use of rhyme and language to convey your powerful message. Just a suggestion, you might want to consider adding an illustration to your poem, hope you don't mind me saying so. Enjoyable read. Much luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Thank you for your kind review as well as your suggestion. I will add an illustration to future poems....as soon as I figure out how to do it...

reply by Nosha17 on 25-Mar-2014

It isn't too hard, I managed it and I am not good at computers, You can add one to this poem by clicking on edit in the poem in portfolio. Then browse for your picture in your file on your computer. Then click upload. In the text box, paste it in again and then save at the bottom. Good luck. Faye

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

I'm a little slow reading my messages but I thank you for the help. I haven't tried it yet but you explained it well.

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

I'm a little slow reading my messages but I thank you for the help. I haven't tried it yet but you explained it well.