Reviews from

Mentally Mired

575 syllables

5 total reviews 
Comment from nelliesellie
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I love the picture. I love the poem. Poor guy has a bird crapping on his head. He lost his nose and thinks he lost his mind. He did not have a mind to begin with but I will not tell him. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2014

reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
    thanks like your thoughts
Comment from RYME4U
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is funny for being not funny. I like it. maybe that bird snipped off your nose. Ha Ha. Good contest entry Well presented

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2014

reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
    Thanks, I tried
Comment from Glasstruth
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

LOL. A noiseless man definitely needs a Michael Jackson facelift, and when you least try that's when the humor comes. Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2014

reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
    Thanks. Never thought of Michael Jackson. That might make an even funnier poem.
Comment from brentman99
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A neat idea for a funny poem. I like the picture as it fits very well. Overall, a nice effort. Thanks for sharing with us, Brent.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2014

reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
    Thanks Brentman. I was stuck trying to write something funny, so I just wrote how I felt and the third line followed.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Help, my mind is stuck 'my mind' good alliteration
It can't think funny at all love 'think funny'
Damn, my nose fell off! Picasso or Dali speaking?

Hilarious pic and poem. Well executed.

Regards:

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2014

reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
    Changed the picture. Thanks for the review.
reply by STEPHEN A CARTER on 11-Apr-2014
    Dear Anon: Love the new pic. Do drop by sometime. Thanks.

    With Respect: Steve C
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
    Not to be picky, but me names Yvon!
reply by STEPHEN A CARTER on 11-Apr-2014
    Dear Yvon: Nice to meet you.

    Cheers: Steve
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
    You too Steve. I'll check you out.
reply by STEPHEN A CARTER on 11-Apr-2014
    Thanks.