Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your few words allow the reader to see and feel that letting go of some-one in your life has set your heart free

"freed" my heart instead of "free"

vivid message

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014

Thanks for the helpful review SC, cheers J

reply by Smoothiecool on 25-Apr-2014

most welcome...SC

Comment from suep

Excellent

I enjoyed your haiku about letting go. I love 'free my heart
tangled up with yours' and how it is illustrated by the tangle of balloons floating up into the sky. Great job ... Best wishes in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

Thanks for the review, cheers

Comment from Pegcook

Excellent

I love the message and the illustration! You really captured the theme of letting go. This 5-7-5 has all syllables present and accounted for. Great Job!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

Thanks Peg for the encouraging review, cheers

Comment from leather

Excellent

I think the image of the tangled balloons fit very well with the poem. And, the poem did sound sincere and was well spell checked. A very nice job! I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Thanks for the review leather,cheers

Comment from ragamuffin

Excellent

A lovely and longing piece that illustrates artfully and well how hard it is to let go of a relationship that we've put much of ourselves into.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

I am going through this now. No anger or regret,just sadness knowing that it is over, cheers