What is poetry
The meaning of poetry2 total reviews
Comment from visionary1234
oops - this isn't a 5-7-5! You've set all three lines as one line. Your first sentence has 7 syllables (it needs only 5). Not too late to fix it though - go for it! You'll soon learn and 5 7 5's are great fun!
:)Sharyn
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oops - this isn't a 5-7-5! You've set all three lines as one line. Your first sentence has 7 syllables (it needs only 5). Not too late to fix it though - go for it! You'll soon learn and 5 7 5's are great fun!
:)Sharyn
Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from LIJ Red
Pardon me but I had a little trouble with the first five.
I keep coming up with 19 syllables. If you forsook the 5/7/5 notion, I'd add a comma after ask and a question mark between poetrys. I am a wealth of meddling suggestions.
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Pardon me but I had a little trouble with the first five.
I keep coming up with 19 syllables. If you forsook the 5/7/5 notion, I'd add a comma after ask and a question mark between poetrys. I am a wealth of meddling suggestions.
Comment Written 09-May-2014
