Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "One Windy Day"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
6 total reviews
Comment from Bina1
Images of a sweet summer day! Thank you for sharing, good luck in the contest. A fine entry you offer here. Great art selection.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
Images of a sweet summer day! Thank you for sharing, good luck in the contest. A fine entry you offer here. Great art selection.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thank you Bina1, for your kindness and encouragement!
Comment from Green Lake Girl
You have my vote. This was the best in the bunch. Great rhyming. Super artwork. Hope you do well in this contest. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
You have my vote. This was the best in the bunch. Great rhyming. Super artwork. Hope you do well in this contest. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much Green Lake Girl, for this kind and encouraging review!!
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
syllable and rhyme spot on
good image portrayed of kite flying one need to hang on tight while it is in flight
cheers..Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
good luck in the contest
syllable and rhyme spot on
good image portrayed of kite flying one need to hang on tight while it is in flight
cheers..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much for your words of encouragement and for your insights!!
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welcome..SC
Comment from Jean Lutz
In just a few words you capture nature, joy and wonder. You blend human nature -- that of a child -- and the force of nature very well. Best to you with this entry.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
In just a few words you capture nature, joy and wonder. You blend human nature -- that of a child -- and the force of nature very well. Best to you with this entry.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Thank you Jean, for this very kind and encouraging review!
Comment from jmdg1954
kite
big eyed child holds on tight
flight
Wow, perfectly done. Not only is the syllable count correct, the rhyme is spot on and it all makes perfect sense. Nice flow and not forced.
Best of contest luck! John
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
kite
big eyed child holds on tight
flight
Wow, perfectly done. Not only is the syllable count correct, the rhyme is spot on and it all makes perfect sense. Nice flow and not forced.
Best of contest luck! John
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Wow! Thank you so much for your kindness and encouraging words, and I am honored by the six stars!!
Comment from zanya
Yes a moment of bliss for the young child as he/she explores other worlds and possibilities on his all-too-fast journey towards adulthood
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
Yes a moment of bliss for the young child as he/she explores other worlds and possibilities on his all-too-fast journey towards adulthood
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much for your insights and kind and encouraging review!