Comment from Deniz22

Excellent

This makes me feel bad for you and hope you find some good things to balance the bad so you can have hope and be uplifted in your heart! Well written, however. Dennis

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014

thanks denni your views will guid me alot

Comment from OLA THOMAS

Excellent

Good thought in your 5-7-5 poem. Good alliteration in the first line with 'see; sea and sigh.' Good end rhymes with 'sigh; high and why.' I suggest that you check your author's comments again; I think it should rather be ..."feeling gloomy on the condition of our world" , you need to take off 'our'.

ola thomas

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2014

thanks alot OLA for giving your precious time to my work. I realy liked your suggession regarding author comments. I wrote it to show
how attached we are to this worl and it stands for the humanity in general.Your great thoughts are all ways a source of guidline for me.again THANKS ALOT DEAR

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014

hi ola i have no means contact o chat and discuss with you please help me in this regard if you can.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I like your poem in this 5-7-5 poetry contest, I like your attempt at this limiting poetic form!It seems it is a qulifying entry, I hope you do well, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2014

Thanks Roy, your compliments are truly a moral booster for a person like me. again thanking your great self. GOD BLESS YOU WITH YOUR LOVING ONES

reply by royowen on 18-Jul-2014

You as well, Roy.