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contest entry about kittens17 total reviews
Comment from Judy Couch
Very good poem. I liked the contemplation on the joys and problems of raising a kitten. I loved the ending where she decided to adopt both of them.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Very good poem. I liked the contemplation on the joys and problems of raising a kitten. I loved the ending where she decided to adopt both of them.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Thank you Judy for the excellent review.
Comment from mommerry
The anticipation of what a kitten would do to add to your life is so nice - you look at both the plus and minus but decided two pluses will make up for whatever minus activity might be involved. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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The anticipation of what a kitten would do to add to your life is so nice - you look at both the plus and minus but decided two pluses will make up for whatever minus activity might be involved. Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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I am pleased you liked my poem thanks for the great review.
Comment from ann marie mazz
this entry is adorable
I love your ending line of twos
very true
this entry is poetic
the rhyming quatrains are lovely
your words flowed
it was enjoyable to read
thank you for sharing your poetic talent
good luck with the contest
ann marie
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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this entry is adorable
I love your ending line of twos
very true
this entry is poetic
the rhyming quatrains are lovely
your words flowed
it was enjoyable to read
thank you for sharing your poetic talent
good luck with the contest
ann marie
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Thanks Ann Marie Mazz for the excellent review
Comment from tbacha58
WOW, first, that picture is so real, I have never seen cats with blue eyes.
You definitely wrote a beautiful description of your future kittens. Writing also about yourself, made it even such a beautiful sad story. Your rhyming, is great, for me , you are the winner. Terry
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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WOW, first, that picture is so real, I have never seen cats with blue eyes.
You definitely wrote a beautiful description of your future kittens. Writing also about yourself, made it even such a beautiful sad story. Your rhyming, is great, for me , you are the winner. Terry
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thanks for the wonderful review and brilliant comments
Comment from Dawny53
This is my second visit to your poem.. I think it's very good but I keep coming back to the last stanza and wondering about disrupted lawns.. somehow it's just not making sense to me.. please forgive me if I sound harsh, I don't mean to be.. it's just that I think it's quite good and should become excellent with that one small change.. how about After thinking through the pros and cons.. I think that with the coming dawn, I'm going to hide all my shoes.. cuz kittens are much better in two's.. just a thought
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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This is my second visit to your poem.. I think it's very good but I keep coming back to the last stanza and wondering about disrupted lawns.. somehow it's just not making sense to me.. please forgive me if I sound harsh, I don't mean to be.. it's just that I think it's quite good and should become excellent with that one small change.. how about After thinking through the pros and cons.. I think that with the coming dawn, I'm going to hide all my shoes.. cuz kittens are much better in two's.. just a thought
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thanks for the review an the time you have taken to make suggestions.
The line with disrupted lawns was one of the cons of having cats as they can ruin some lawns, But I do like your suggestion, so I may consider changing.
thanks again.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Uh-oh! You've opted for double trouble, have you? Say so long to your draperies, and upholstery, and so long to anything hanging or dangling within their reach. They are a rambunctious lot!
Very well rhymed, and the tempo and flow was excellent.
Good luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Uh-oh! You've opted for double trouble, have you? Say so long to your draperies, and upholstery, and so long to anything hanging or dangling within their reach. They are a rambunctious lot!
Very well rhymed, and the tempo and flow was excellent.
Good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thanks Dean for the excellent review I am pleased you enjoyed it.
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The pleasure was all mine.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the whimsy of the kitty prompt splendidly. Double the pleasure and double the fun and they can amuse each other when you get tired of throwing the ball LOL. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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This meets the whimsy of the kitty prompt splendidly. Double the pleasure and double the fun and they can amuse each other when you get tired of throwing the ball LOL. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thanks for the excellent review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your picture is so adorable. I like the way you described all the things the kitties do to occupy their time. Yes, I have seen mine do most of the same things especially falling down stairs and climbing chairs. I like how you told about the person living alone and wanting a kitty or two. Our pets are so important to us. They help us to live longer. No changes needed. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Your picture is so adorable. I like the way you described all the things the kitties do to occupy their time. Yes, I have seen mine do most of the same things especially falling down stairs and climbing chairs. I like how you told about the person living alone and wanting a kitty or two. Our pets are so important to us. They help us to live longer. No changes needed. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thanks Jannypan for the wonderful comments in your excellent review.
Comment from dennis0530
This is cute and clean. The wordings are just right for kids; easily understandable and explained. This poem could be a part of any child's nursery rhyme.
Since it touches on the subject of kittens, this piece will easily appeal to many kids in a wide age range. However, the writer also plans to have two kittens as house companions. This decision will not be regretted. Two balls of fur in the house means endless entertainment and joyful companionsship.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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This is cute and clean. The wordings are just right for kids; easily understandable and explained. This poem could be a part of any child's nursery rhyme.
Since it touches on the subject of kittens, this piece will easily appeal to many kids in a wide age range. However, the writer also plans to have two kittens as house companions. This decision will not be regretted. Two balls of fur in the house means endless entertainment and joyful companionsship.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your minimalist style and cutest kittens' picture. Your rhymed couplets in quatrains enhances the storytelling. Cheers and enjoy your new room mates! -Joan
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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I admired your minimalist style and cutest kittens' picture. Your rhymed couplets in quatrains enhances the storytelling. Cheers and enjoy your new room mates! -Joan
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thanks Joan for the wonderful comments in your excellent review.
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Best wishes in what I now realize must be a blind contest. More cheers- Joan
