Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Okay, It wasn't sad. I had a special kitten as well just lost him this summer. This is a lovely story Sally , Well Done. I enjoyed it. Hugs Nancy

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014

No, it wasn't sad. She was such a joy to me, but now I cannot have a cat as I am allergic, which makes me sad. Thanks for your lovely words, Nancy. Hugs. Sally

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your story about your kittens and how cats and kittens have different personalities, and do react in such different ways. Recently we had a beautiful kitten who nearly spoke to us and she was killed crossing the road.
I love cats I have had them as a little girl and I love their nature. They are selfish but they still are wonderful when the sit and purr on your lap.

Well written
good luck in the contest Mary

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Thanks Mary, for your very thoughtful review. I love cats, too, but can no longer have them as I am allergic to pet hair and pet dander. :>( Miss Sally

Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

This is a very good story. It is fun to read about the antics of your cat. One thing to look at is: "Where I stayed until she had the first kitten, then she was fine." This is not a sentence. It's a prepostional phrase. You could change the word "where" to "there" and it would make more sense. I liked the way you ended the story with a prompt for another one.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014

Thanks Judy I appreciate your catching that little error and thanks for the nice review. :>D

Comment from mommerry

Excellent

Your story is well done. Your words allow the reader to "see" your pet and understand how you allowed her to let you know what was going on in her life. Good job.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014

Thanks Mommerry, for this very nice review. I do appreciate it.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely. This is a well penned narrative and since the rules did not specify poetry, a unique entry that stands out. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014

thanks Mystic Angel. I really do appreciate your nice review. :>D

Comment from drivenbackward

Excellent

Engaging story. It was fun to read about your kitten. She must have been pretty busy at night. :)

I loved her and I feel that she loved me, as well -- No comma.

Her first batch of kittens were born on my bed, at the foot, in the middle of the night. --'at the foot of my bed in the middle of the night.'

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014

Thanks for the nice review, Driven, I do appreciate it. Miss Sally

Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

Author: lovely story about your Samantha. We have six cats, all with entirely different personalities. Each has its own distinct way of communicating with us. As a cat lover, I understand your story well. Good luck in the contest. livelylinda

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014

Thank you Linda for the nice review. :>D

Comment from gypsycaravan

Excellent

Love the photo of your pets. Very pretty animals. Your story of Samantha's nose to nose thing was quite a visual for me. Made me want to smile. Thanks for posting.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014

Thanks for the nice review. This photo is from FanArt and not my cats, but the white one looks like Sam did. :>D

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

You make it sound very believable but have placed it in fiction, so I guess that means you're a pretty good story teller..
Well done with your entry in the contest, Buck

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014

There was some miscommunication on the posting. It is not fiction. It is a true story of my cat Samantha. They had it in poetry first and I asked Tom to fix it. It should not have been posted in fiction. Thanks for the nice review and for bringing this to my attention. :>D

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

This is a wonderfully written heartwarming story it is an excellent entry for this particular competition, I wish you lots of luck my friend.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014

Thanks Eric. I am anxiously waiting for the results. Thanks for the nice review. :>D

reply by Eric1 on 05-Oct-2014

You are very welcome, don't ever be too disheartened by the results my friend, they sometimes don't ring true.