Truly Baffling
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Comment from Rubylou
I enjoyed this short poem. Even though he left, the expression of the woman's face makes me think he will return. I feel this because of your last line,"...he left so abruptly.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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I enjoyed this short poem. Even though he left, the expression of the woman's face makes me think he will return. I feel this because of your last line,"...he left so abruptly.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from write hand blue
I like this, I would think that the poem was written about the picture. Because she looks like she is a little unsure of herself, as if he's just walked out.
Thought provoking, an interesting poem. Nice work. :) Mel.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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I like this, I would think that the poem was written about the picture. Because she looks like she is a little unsure of herself, as if he's just walked out.
Thought provoking, an interesting poem. Nice work. :) Mel.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Short and maybe not so sweet.. Leaves the reader wondering just why he left. It does open the door to ones imagination as to why. And that my friend I like a lot. Thanks for posting this lil gem
TK
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Short and maybe not so sweet.. Leaves the reader wondering just why he left. It does open the door to ones imagination as to why. And that my friend I like a lot. Thanks for posting this lil gem
TK
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author a very mysterious poem--
You have me wondering why the good looking girl is
luring men and then they decide to leave
Maybe she has evil plans for them and they get the vibes of trouble.
Gert
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Hello author a very mysterious poem--
You have me wondering why the good looking girl is
luring men and then they decide to leave
Maybe she has evil plans for them and they get the vibes of trouble.
Gert
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from Malerie
Very powerful and emotional piece. The artwork captures the essence of your words and draws the readers into her story. Great read thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Very powerful and emotional piece. The artwork captures the essence of your words and draws the readers into her story. Great read thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from butterfly4265
Very powerful and definitely very thought provoking. Very well conveyed in just a few words.
Excellent piece, and thank you so much for sharing!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Very powerful and definitely very thought provoking. Very well conveyed in just a few words.
Excellent piece, and thank you so much for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
How true it is that even those blessed with great beauty still suffer from doubt and insecurities. I am reminded of my favorite Peacock quote.
"Behold the Peacock
In all his beauty, he only notices that he has ugly feet.
A clever, succinct write. - Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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How true it is that even those blessed with great beauty still suffer from doubt and insecurities. I am reminded of my favorite Peacock quote.
"Behold the Peacock
In all his beauty, he only notices that he has ugly feet.
A clever, succinct write. - Wendy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review and insightful words about the peacock.
Comment from patcelaw
To be suddenly alone is hard. But if we think about what we had before the time of being left, we can relax. We can be confident when we know our being does not depend on the love of another person. Attractive we can be, but sometimes other will leave us alone.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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To be suddenly alone is hard. But if we think about what we had before the time of being left, we can relax. We can be confident when we know our being does not depend on the love of another person. Attractive we can be, but sometimes other will leave us alone.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi.. this is a super tank type poem...too bad you did not enter it...I think it would have done well.
The pivot line is wonderful.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Hi.. this is a super tank type poem...too bad you did not enter it...I think it would have done well.
The pivot line is wonderful.
padumachitta
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review. You are right, I should have entered this one in the contest.
Comment from Ekim777
A picture speaks a thousand words. Your picture says it all. Here we have a lady with soul, self contained, cold maybe in her isolation. What man would not be frightened away. He should have humbled himself. -Ekim777
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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A picture speaks a thousand words. Your picture says it all. Here we have a lady with soul, self contained, cold maybe in her isolation. What man would not be frightened away. He should have humbled himself. -Ekim777
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
