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Comment from Selina Stambi
So he won't be singing with Alvin and the Chipmunks, "All I want for Chriss-mass is my two front teeth...." :)
Adorable wee one, Grampa!
Tom, how is your wife's back?
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2014
So he won't be singing with Alvin and the Chipmunks, "All I want for Chriss-mass is my two front teeth...." :)
Adorable wee one, Grampa!
Tom, how is your wife's back?
Comment Written 08-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2014
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Thanks Sonali, for the review. Her back is about the same. Good in morning, gets worst as day goes on. Then gets to lev 7. Sonetime lev 9, which is usually in tears at 9.
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HOw awful. I still remember to pray for her. Poor lady. My heart goes out to her.
Comment from Joan E.
He's a cutie with his new "choppers". When my son was teething, he drooled so much he developed a rash--talk about cranky! Your clever, rhymed quatrain brought back many memories. Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2014
He's a cutie with his new "choppers". When my son was teething, he drooled so much he developed a rash--talk about cranky! Your clever, rhymed quatrain brought back many memories. Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 08-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2014
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Thank you Joan. Most parents and grandparents can relate, I'm sure.
Comment from RGstar
I guess you better get ready to fork out those dollars for the tooth fairy.
I hope your pockets are deep.
Nice to see human nature in its glory here.
Best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
I guess you better get ready to fork out those dollars for the tooth fairy.
I hope your pockets are deep.
Nice to see human nature in its glory here.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Thank you RG. The tell me its $5 these days, geez. I got Quarters.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Tom, I laughed so much with this lovely work. Just what I needed too. That picture is adorable. Thanks for sharing this one, perfectly said.
Maureen
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
Dear Tom, I laughed so much with this lovely work. Just what I needed too. That picture is adorable. Thanks for sharing this one, perfectly said.
Maureen
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Thank you Maureen. We can all use a good laugh.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Wow! A very impressive smile too.
The words capture a very important milestone.
What a beautiful smile -I'm sure everyone is
glad this trying time is over.
I really enjoyed the rhymed quatrains and can relate to
the poem as my granddaughter is teething as well.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
Wow! A very impressive smile too.
The words capture a very important milestone.
What a beautiful smile -I'm sure everyone is
glad this trying time is over.
I really enjoyed the rhymed quatrains and can relate to
the poem as my granddaughter is teething as well.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 05-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thank you Shirley. Yup, you certainly do know, then.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Perfect rhyme and perfect photo to go with it. Ha seems it fits me as well just got some dental work done so maybe I won't be so cranky..Well I didn't think I was but someone who I live with say I was..Wonder who that could be lol
TK
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
Perfect rhyme and perfect photo to go with it. Ha seems it fits me as well just got some dental work done so maybe I won't be so cranky..Well I didn't think I was but someone who I live with say I was..Wonder who that could be lol
TK
Comment Written 05-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thank you Sir T. I bet it just might be a mermaid
Comment from fastdigits
Words that paint a meshing picture
of the photo displayed to go with
your warmth tinged grandmotherly
thoughts of that teething period
that we all go through.
Well done
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
Words that paint a meshing picture
of the photo displayed to go with
your warmth tinged grandmotherly
thoughts of that teething period
that we all go through.
Well done
Comment Written 05-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thank you fastdigits. Yes, and grandfatherly too.
Comment from Capricorn30
A well-penned monorhyme--
thank you for sharing a small poem, much like the little adorable child you write of;
New teeth exciting, both for children and parents!
He is so cute, Tom!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
A well-penned monorhyme--
thank you for sharing a small poem, much like the little adorable child you write of;
New teeth exciting, both for children and parents!
He is so cute, Tom!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thank you Margaret