Career Change
Denise gets an unexpected job applicant3 total reviews
Comment from Sun
Wow, amazing story! A very creative way of approaching the contest prompt. It was suspenseful, the dialog was great and humorous, I felt I was sitting in on the interview.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016
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Wow, amazing story! A very creative way of approaching the contest prompt. It was suspenseful, the dialog was great and humorous, I felt I was sitting in on the interview.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016
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Thank you and so glad you enjoyed it!!! :)
Comment from Mellie Justad
Fabulous! What a hoot! Excellent concept and great use of humor. Loved the dialogue and the pace flowed nicely. I really liked the Highway to Hell, though the way sentence was written with the question mark in middle followed with the dashes was a bit confusing, otherwise great job!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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Fabulous! What a hoot! Excellent concept and great use of humor. Loved the dialogue and the pace flowed nicely. I really liked the Highway to Hell, though the way sentence was written with the question mark in middle followed with the dashes was a bit confusing, otherwise great job!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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Thanks so much for your enthusiasm and kind words!!! Your feedback is much appreciated! :D
Comment from RodG
As advertised, this was humorous and entertaining. I can almost visualize the scenario and it was fun to meet Lucifer in this scene. The dialog was excellent and both parties seemed "real." You seem also to have satirized the insurance corporations who some think are ALREADY in league with the devil. Delightful!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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As advertised, this was humorous and entertaining. I can almost visualize the scenario and it was fun to meet Lucifer in this scene. The dialog was excellent and both parties seemed "real." You seem also to have satirized the insurance corporations who some think are ALREADY in league with the devil. Delightful!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much for your feedback! I have not done many short stories like this so your comments are incredibly helpful! :D
