Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

This contest has been a good one to read from, another great limerick that I've enjoyed. You can never depend on Hexed Potions - maybe it had vitaswim 'Sea' in it. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

Thank you so much for your review. It has been fun with this contest. I have had more fun reading all of the other limericks.

Comment from Lovinia

Excellent

Hello AnnieDawn

I haven't read a bad entry in this contest yet. More on the bawdy side so far, yet a good clean limerick is also funny. I love your creative use of perfect rhyme with "potion/ocean/motion". I have a great visual as I see her head bobbing with the driftwood as it passes her by. A well endurance swimming has its benefits too ... something about the tortoise and the hare, though I don't know what they have to do with the ocean. LOL Great work, up against quite a grand show of entries. I wish you the best of luck. The voting will be difficult though. Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxo

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015

Thank you so much for your review. It has been fun with this contest. I have had more fun reading all of the other limericks.

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Bet if a shark was after her she would have swum much faster. Well written limerick that should also make for a good contest entry.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015

Thanks so much for your review and kind remarks. I had fun and this was a new experience for me.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello :)

I like your limerick. It has the correct amount of syllables and it is bawdy but not lewd. Some of the other contest entries are really gross. Good job!
gypsy

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015

Thanks so much for your review and kind remarks. I had fun and this was a new experience for me.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I'll bet there is a lot of flotsam and jetsam in the ocean to slow down people and ships alike. Interesting and unique story limerick.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015

Thank you for your review. The fun is in reading all the other limericks. I have had a good laugh over many of them.

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

Annie,
lol, I hate it when that happens! ;)
Another fun entry into this contest... a bit more tame than some I've seen LOL
Good luck in the contest!
Cat

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015

Thanks for your review of my limerick. I am having such fun with these contests and especially reading from all the talented people.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

LOL. A hexed potion, can't trust 'em. Sounds like she thought she could do everything, but then reality sinks in. Nice rhyming and the syllable count seems alright. Wonderfully written. Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thank you for your review. I appreciate the time you have taken to do this. It is fun to do a poem like this as this is my first limerick.

Comment from Rob Caudle

Excellent

Well done this contest has brought out so many good entry yours among them how can anyone choose well done and good luck in the booth.
Rob

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thank you for your review. I appreciate the time you have taken to do this. It is fun to do a poem like this as this is my first limerick.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Swimming the English channel has been done many times. Even swimming to Cuba has been done. Swimming the Atlantic Ocean has yet to be accomplish. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks so much for your review of my limerick. I do appreciate the time it takes to do these reviews.

reply by c_lucas on 10-Oct-2015

You're welcome, Annie. Charlie

Comment from GentleWind

Excellent

Another great limerick that I enjoyed. Loved the imagery and it flowed well.
Made you feel you were there watching. Great job

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks so much for your review of my limerick. I do appreciate the time it takes to do these reviews.