Gentle Rains
Thoughts from a sermon23 total reviews
Comment from Treischel
A lovely poem that ripples through the essence of the. Holy Trinity, showing their unique aspects in each Stanza. You carry it through storms, people, and Nature. Well crafted with a stellar spiritual soul.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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A lovely poem that ripples through the essence of the. Holy Trinity, showing their unique aspects in each Stanza. You carry it through storms, people, and Nature. Well crafted with a stellar spiritual soul.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Thanks Treischel for the lovely review and the rating. Blessings my friend.
Comment from Zue65
I just love this poem, you should have joined the Faith poetry contest. This is definitely a good entry my friend. I can feel how close you are with God and the kind of relationship you have with Him, that you can feel the Lord's presence in all His creations. Thanks for sharing this excellent poem.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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I just love this poem, you should have joined the Faith poetry contest. This is definitely a good entry my friend. I can feel how close you are with God and the kind of relationship you have with Him, that you can feel the Lord's presence in all His creations. Thanks for sharing this excellent poem.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2015
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Thanks for the nice review. I don't often enter the contests, but thank you for saying such a nice thing about it having been a good poem for the faith contest.
Comment from ann marie mazz
hello patricia
this is beautiful
I think the lord would approve
the voice and tone are poetic
as are your words and thoughts
the theme is timeless
all is well within the entry including the title
I see so much beauty
thank you for sharing your talent
this was a pleasure to read
ann marie
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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hello patricia
this is beautiful
I think the lord would approve
the voice and tone are poetic
as are your words and thoughts
the theme is timeless
all is well within the entry including the title
I see so much beauty
thank you for sharing your talent
this was a pleasure to read
ann marie
Comment Written 06-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Ann Marie, thanks for the nice review.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi if you have faith there is nothing that you cannot do. But what you need you seem to have them all...this great tranquility, love and faith. And this is what your writing is about, i am sure.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Hi if you have faith there is nothing that you cannot do. But what you need you seem to have them all...this great tranquility, love and faith. And this is what your writing is about, i am sure.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 06-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Thanks, Benny for the nice review. My faith is important to me and I love to write about it.
Comment from OnyxSapphire78
Oh Patricia what a delightful heartfelt poem! I love how you approached this and how the beauty, the love, the peace, and the strength of our Lord come shining through. You showed us something beautiful and I thank you.
In the thunderstorms
I hear the voice of God.
This makes me think of His strength and His power.
Thank you for sharing. I was very touched by your words, imagery, and sentiment. God Bless
Amber
In the light breezes
I know the Spirit is near.
I can see this and it is beautiful.
In the gentle rains
I hear the name of Jesus.
This is a beautiful way to think of Jesus. I too think of Him as so gentle and loving.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Oh Patricia what a delightful heartfelt poem! I love how you approached this and how the beauty, the love, the peace, and the strength of our Lord come shining through. You showed us something beautiful and I thank you.
In the thunderstorms
I hear the voice of God.
This makes me think of His strength and His power.
Thank you for sharing. I was very touched by your words, imagery, and sentiment. God Bless
Amber
In the light breezes
I know the Spirit is near.
I can see this and it is beautiful.
In the gentle rains
I hear the name of Jesus.
This is a beautiful way to think of Jesus. I too think of Him as so gentle and loving.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Thanks for the delightful review. I am so glad you enjoyed it. I wanted people to see the Triune God. Thanks also for the six.
Comment from dragonpoet
Patricia you responded very well to that sermon. I like the view of the Trinity here.
These three stanzas show the love and strength people get from their faith,
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Patricia you responded very well to that sermon. I like the view of the Trinity here.
These three stanzas show the love and strength people get from their faith,
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 06-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Thank you for the lovely review.
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Any time.
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Comment from boxergirl
Nice job, Patricia, with your poem about gentle rains. A good time to stop and listen for the voice of God. Picture compliments as well.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Nice job, Patricia, with your poem about gentle rains. A good time to stop and listen for the voice of God. Picture compliments as well.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Thank you boxergirl for the nice review.
Comment from Deborah Marie
patcecaw,
Thank you for sharing a meaning poem and wonderful artwork. Meaning resonates within me. Sermons spark poems inside me too. Nice progression, rhythm, flow, color scheme, and analogies. A job well done.
God Bless,
Deb
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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patcecaw,
Thank you for sharing a meaning poem and wonderful artwork. Meaning resonates within me. Sermons spark poems inside me too. Nice progression, rhythm, flow, color scheme, and analogies. A job well done.
God Bless,
Deb
Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from madhatter1977
Hi, Patricia, I hope you feel better soon and this is a lovely poem from the sermon you heard, full of great natural imagery about life and the world we live in. I found it very moving! Best wishes, Pete :)
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Hi, Patricia, I hope you feel better soon and this is a lovely poem from the sermon you heard, full of great natural imagery about life and the world we live in. I found it very moving! Best wishes, Pete :)
Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Thank you Pete for the thoughtful review.
Comment from MelB
A very uplifting poem of faith that proves that God's presence, power, and strength is everywhere, whether it be in nature or in a person.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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A very uplifting poem of faith that proves that God's presence, power, and strength is everywhere, whether it be in nature or in a person.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
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Thanks Mel for the nice review. How did your mom's surgery go?
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It went well. She is sore, but recovering. She will get the lab results today and then see if she needs radiation or not.
