Comment from Kaydoe

Excellent

This short poem welcoming an early spring, "premature birth" Nicely worded
and the picture accompanies the poem well. Good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016

Thank you for reviewing.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good picture and presentation.
-You followed the directions for the prompt.
-Good imagery.
-I like your arrangement of the lines:
-It is effective for only 15 words or less.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016

Thanks for reviewing.

reply by Pam (respa) on 24-Feb-2016

You are welcome.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a very nice poem
for the short poem contest
Most of us look forward to spring
an early taste in February is most welcome
those first buds, then blooms
excellent presentation with photograph
and background, font coloring
Well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

We've had unseasonably warm weather in Southern California in February and many trees are in bloom. Your poem uses alliteration well to capture that "premature" "bouquet". Well done! Best wishes in the contest and enjoy the springlike days- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016

Thank you for the kind review. Nature is being confused.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

I think with the Winter so much warmer this year...we will see early blossoms of beauty...never to soon...very nicely written...and I love your picture...luff Lindaxxoo

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

reply by l.raven on 24-Feb-2016

you are so very welcome...xxoo luff

Comment from johngie

Excellent

What a lovely poem you have written about spring. The picture you have chosen is perfect. This entry should do very well in the contest. Best of luck to you.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Sambangi

Excellent

"premature birth" ...very very nice line for early spring. Perfect picture to match with right words. Wish you all the best at voting booth

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016

thanks for the kind review.

Comment from Hannah_Kay

Good

Simple and elegant. Just thought I'd share a personal connection - I live on the east coast and it was around 60 degrees and sunny out on this lovely February Saturday! Thought perhaps you were inspired by the same welcome turn of the weather. Pray it lasts.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016

Same here. Almost 70 in Wv. Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Mystery author, This is a really good entry for this particular competition, your wonderful words are the personification of Spring, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

reply by Eric1 on 21-Feb-2016

You are very welcome my friend,

Comment from chaostranquility

Excellent

Pretty poem about spring. A lot said in only 9 words! I love the metaphor of spring in February as a premature birth. A great entry in the contest. Good luck :)

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016

Thank you for the kind review.