Snug in the heart
Mother's love10 total reviews
Comment from TallySally
Hi Steve - I've been poking around FS looking for good reads and landed on this one.
I am a great fan of profound simplicity that expresses explicit truth. That's what you've achieved here. It's harder to write this way than some folks might think. You've done it well.
Very nice.
God bless and my best,
Relda
reply by the author on 16-May-2016
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Hi Steve - I've been poking around FS looking for good reads and landed on this one.
I am a great fan of profound simplicity that expresses explicit truth. That's what you've achieved here. It's harder to write this way than some folks might think. You've done it well.
Very nice.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 16-May-2016
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Thank you Relda for this most excellent review. I apologize for the delay in my reply. So much has happened here over the last couple of moths. I hope to soon be scribbling away here once more. I enjoy the simplicities myself and find them wonderfully challenging.
God bless!
Steve
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Hope life slows, simplifies, and inspires.
Relda
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Thank you Relda,
Have a blessed evening.
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Thank you Relda,
Have a blessed evening.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a fine short poem. Nothing more needs to be said and I think it is a great entry for the contest. These short ones are hard to write and review simply because of the length, but you did well with it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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This is a fine short poem. Nothing more needs to be said and I think it is a great entry for the contest. These short ones are hard to write and review simply because of the length, but you did well with it. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Thank you Marilyn for this wonderful review. Sorry for the delay in response, I was battling pneumonia and juggling that with too much work.
God bless!
Steve
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Hi Steve. I'm glad you're feeling better now.
Comment from SimplyaStudent
Ok so I guess I didn't realize that you wrote poetry to... as dumb as that sounds. I like this one though. Moms all seem to have a dozen special places in their hearts for all kinds of things.
Very nice piece of work indeed, I found no flaws to speak of. :) SS
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
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Ok so I guess I didn't realize that you wrote poetry to... as dumb as that sounds. I like this one though. Moms all seem to have a dozen special places in their hearts for all kinds of things.
Very nice piece of work indeed, I found no flaws to speak of. :) SS
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
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Thank you SS of this most exceptional six star review my friend. I dabble in a little bit of everything it seems lol.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Domino 2
This is so sweet, and SO true, Steve.
No other love matches that of a parent, and mothers are so often special, as my dear angel was.
'Pure' is a perfect description.
Excellent 'shortie'.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
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This is so sweet, and SO true, Steve.
No other love matches that of a parent, and mothers are so often special, as my dear angel was.
'Pure' is a perfect description.
Excellent 'shortie'.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
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Thank you Ray for awesome review my friend. I agree, no other love like it. I am fortunate enough to still have both my parents as they are in their mid 70"s
God bless!
Steve
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And long may they flourish, Steve. :-)
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Thank you Ray, I can't imagine life without them.
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Thank you Ray, I can't imagine life without them.
Comment from tfawcus
A little gem of a poem for a little gem of a child no doubt! Delightfully penned and with a heart-warming theme that is sure to appeal to the judges in this contest! Good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
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A little gem of a poem for a little gem of a child no doubt! Delightfully penned and with a heart-warming theme that is sure to appeal to the judges in this contest! Good luck!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
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Thank you for the awesome review Tony!
God bless!
Comment from Ricky1024
this is a short poem writing contest very well hayden Panettiere wrong with grated check the content as well as object and on a scale of 1 to 100 I will give it a 100 thanks for this Ricky 1024 out
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
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this is a short poem writing contest very well hayden Panettiere wrong with grated check the content as well as object and on a scale of 1 to 100 I will give it a 100 thanks for this Ricky 1024 out
Comment Written 22-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
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Thank you for this wonderful review Ricky. Thank you as well for offering such a high rating.
God bless!
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you're very welcome dear
Comment from RYME4U
Well done. I like that you put a rhyme to this.You did it in fifteen words like the rules say. Great contest entry. Good luck
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
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Well done. I like that you put a rhyme to this.You did it in fifteen words like the rules say. Great contest entry. Good luck
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
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Thank you for the great review RYME4U, I do enjoy the rhyme.
God bless!
Comment from l.raven
nothing more loving...than the love of a mother...unconditional in every way...truly the purest of love...so very nicely wrtten
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
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nothing more loving...than the love of a mother...unconditional in every way...truly the purest of love...so very nicely wrtten
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
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Thank you Linda for the awesome review my friend. I wouldn't trade my mother for the world.
God bless!
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I know what you mean...you are soooo very welcome...and God Bless to you as well...love Linda xxoo
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good Short Poem contest entry. You have rhymed your poem well on the love a mother feels and said it in 15 words. Great job and best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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This is a good Short Poem contest entry. You have rhymed your poem well on the love a mother feels and said it in 15 words. Great job and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Thank you DD for the awesome review my friend!
God bless!
Comment from anabellapongasi
This is a lovely short poem of fifteen words about a mother's love.
"Purest of love, matched by no other." -perfectly describes a mother's love.
Well done on this. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Anabella
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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This is a lovely short poem of fifteen words about a mother's love.
"Purest of love, matched by no other." -perfectly describes a mother's love.
Well done on this. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Anabella
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Thank you Anabella for this awesome review. My mother's love cannot be measured. She is a saint.
God bless!
