Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

There is no place as comfy as our own homes where we rule and feel like the queen on her throne. It might look chaotic to others but we know where to find anything.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016

Right! Thanks for your review. 8-)

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Poet,

This is a warm and cozy short poem entry you have composed here.
I like your c alliteration and the images you conjured in those few
words.

I especially liked the following line:

"My oasis in chaos"

I was not aware of this contest, but I will be sure not to enter
it now...lol

Linda

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016

I wrote this a long time ago. 8-)

reply by AnnaLinda on 03-Jun-2016

Oh...

Comment from Beverly Botelho

Excellent

I see you write for children, and this would be a perfect way to introduce a child to poetry. A loving hom.e is the answer for saving this world, and you've addressed it with finesse

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016

Thank you. I wrote a while back, but I wanted to see if it held any interest for anyone. Thank you for your very kind remarks. 8-)

reply by Beverly Botelho on 03-Jun-2016

Very peaceful. Every child should have a home like that

reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016

Thank you. 8-)

reply by Anonymous Member on 05-Jun-2016

Thank you. 8-)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork.
-You followed the directions for the prompt.
-I like the stanza divisions.
-The first one is clever with the last line:
"My oasis in chaos"
-Nice sentiment expressed in the second stanza.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016

I wrote this months and months ago. I just wanted to see if it sparked any interest for anyone. Thank you for your lovely remarks. I must confess, "oasis in chaos" was my favorite, too. heehee

I appreciate you reviewing this for me. Thank you so much. 8-)

reply by Pam (respa) on 03-Jun-2016

I thought it was good. Glad you shared it. You are welcome for the review and I appreciate your comment about the line:)

Comment from Jeffers63

Excellent

thanks for this nice poem that speaks of the best things in live. No matter were our journey takes us? as Dorothy once said there is no place like home.

Regards
Jeffers63

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016

That's the truth! Thanks for reviewing. 8-)

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

Oasis in chaos - nice line. This is a good short verse. Home should be a safe place whee love reigns supreme. You did well on this one

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016

Thank you so much. You're been such a good friend to me. 8-)