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He has Risen

The real meaning of Easter.

15 total reviews 
Comment from jlsavell
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Kace, and to you sweet friend my last 6 for the week. Your rhythm is almost spot on. The sentiment exquisite . Beautiful, ethereal. Thank you dear Kace for you. Your friend always Jimi

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2016
    G'day Possum, thanks so much for reading and for the six star rating. Glad you enjoyed Jimi. Happy Easter my friend. Love, Kay.
Comment from l.raven
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HI Kay, this is just beautiful sweet lady...an amazing story told...I love this poem...beautifully written...and the picture is stunning...HAPPY EASTER Kay....love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
    Hi there Luverly Linda, Thanks for reading and I wish you and yours a very Happy Easter (not too many chocolates) Hee, Hee. Love, Kay.
reply by l.raven on 19-Mar-2016
    I already stared eating them...I wanted to beat the rush...LOL...you are so welcome sweetie pie...big hugs to ya...Love xxoo Linda
Comment from mermaids
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Your poetic form captures the image of the risen Christ. The reader feels like she is there with Mary Magdalene, seeing Him in His risen form. Your verses are smooth and I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2016
    Thank you so very much for your kind review. Happy Easter my friend. Hugs, Kay.
Comment from Alan K Pease
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You write an excellent poem of the world of faith that celebrates the birth of Jesus and his resurrection. I know you have carried that faith throughout your life even in the dark moments. Take care and love always - Alan.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2016
    Alan, Thank you so very much; Happy Easter to you both. Love, Kay.
Comment from Taffspride
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A good entry for the Easter Poetry contest Kaye. I so enjoyed the story of Mary Magdalen.

The poem read aloud so well.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

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Ann


 Comment Written 15-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2016
    Hello Ann, Thanks so much for reading. Happy Easter my friend. Hugs, Kay.
Comment from Sasha
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Lovely work with this one and a terrific entry for this contest. Excellent presentation and I love how you told the story of Mary Magdalene asking a gardener if he knew where the body was. This is a great entry and I sincerely wish you all the best too.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Hello there friend! Thanks so much for reading, so pleased you liked the poem. I took it from memory (Bible) can't quote any verses. Happy Easter, Hugs, Kay.
Comment from William Ross
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Very Good, Another great entry on the Easter prompt. well written. good rhyme and rhythm of course a great story and a wonderful read. Will be a tough contest to vote on. Great job, and have a wonderful evening.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Thanks so much for reading and glad you enjoyed. Happy Easter William. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Writingfundimension
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Kay, this is an excellent Easter Poem contest entry.

What I especially liked was the storytelling behind the rhyme.

The following particularly resonated with me:

'Where are you my precious Lord?'
A gardener, tall and spectre-like
Drifted towards grieving ward
Called to her, face now bright...'

I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

Hugs, Bev

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Hello Possum, Thanks so much for reading; glad you enjoyed. Happy Easter my friend. Love, Kay.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Happy Easter Kay. Yes, Easter is not about Easter eggs and bunnies and baby chicks but what they stand for. For the chance to be born again. New in the eyes of the Lord. Well done dear. Nice presentation too. hugs Nancy

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Hello Nancy, Thanks so much for reading; glad you enjoyed. Wishing you a blessed Easter. Love, Kay.
Comment from Loren (7)
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And, as the pastor at our church would say: "And so, this is our faith, that He is risen." It gives us all great hope and reason to be thankful for the sacrifice God and Jesus has made. It is completed and now, our new life begins, renewed once again! Lovely poem. Best of luck in the contest! Loren

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Hello Loren, Thanks so much for reading; glad you enjoyed. A blessed Easter to you. Hugs, Kay.