Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Wally Weasel a funny comical name for an animal. This Is an amusing entertaining
piece perfect for children of all ages. Tells of his wild adventures. liberty justice

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016

Thank you.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

The poem - great another fun episode that kids will identify with becuse most of them have fallen off a bike at some stage.

The picture. At first I got his harm muddled up with his tale, perhaps if his claws were more sharply defined - blacker, that wouldn't happen.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016

Thank you for your compliments. I will attend to his arm. 8-)

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016

Is the new picture better or worse?

I'll do some touch-ups on future ones. Thanks. 8-)

reply by Pantygynt on 28-Apr-2016

THis is much better offsetting the arm slightly has helped as well as defining the claws better. A great improvement.

reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

Thank you. 8-)

reply by Anonymous Member on 01-May-2016

Thank you. 8-)

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for adorning your words with your own sketch--it is quite clever and reinforces the mountain and painting themes well. I enjoyed your storytelling and rhymed quatrains. I'm curious to learn if Wally sighted a "woodland elf" or something more menacing... Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016

He may go back and try to find out some day. Thank you for a very nice review. I appreciate your kind comments. 8-)

Comment from L.lora

Excellent

You have a very descriptive
adventure going on with loads
of colorful words and action.
The easy cadence is sure to be
a delight for any child/adult
who has the opportunity to read
this poem. A small suggestion:
check line 2, you might want to
remove the word "to" in order for
the flow of this line to be more in
sync with the others. A most enjoyable
read. No nits etc. Lora

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016

Thanks for a very nice review.

I'll look at line 2. 8-)

reply by L.lora on 26-Apr-2016

You are most welcome. Lora

Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, a truly enjoyable children's poem, suitable for all ages - the children will just love this, and their parents, too, because it will be fun to read it to them again and again. The rhyme and meter are wonderfully rendered...

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you for reading it. I appreciate the new review. 8-)

reply by evesayshi on 26-Apr-2016

You are very welcome - an excellent read...

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

Start the day full of energy Wally rides his bike high up in the mountain he painted a beautiful painting of the mountains and the skies.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016

Thank you for reviewing this. 8-)

I'm taking a poll. Do you enjoy Wally?

reply by Sandra du Plessis on 26-Apr-2016

Yes, and my grand kids too ages 6&8

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016

Thank you for telling me this. 8-)

reply by Anonymous Member on 28-Apr-2016

Thank you for telling me this. 8-)

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi damommy, this is another excellent addition to your ever growing portfolio of Wally poems, perfectly pitched and beautifully rhymed with excellent rhythm and flow my friend.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

Thank you. You are always so gracious in your reviews. I'm so happy you like Wally and his shenanigans. 8-)

reply by Eric1 on 27-Apr-2016

You are welcome my friend.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I really like the photo you used for this poem. You also used very good rhyming and descriptive wording. It is always a joy to read about Wally. He is so cute. Great job. hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. He's fun to write about. I appreciate your gracious comments. 8-)

reply by Teri7 on 25-Apr-2016

He does make me smile and so do you. hugs, Teri

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Very nice rhyme, rhythm, and flow. I like the sketch. This is another fun Wally adventure. I think curiosity will get the better of him and he will be back.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

You think so? Could be. But don't you go and encourage him. LOL

Thank you for the review and your kind comments. I think I can make the sketch better. My friend told me it LOOKS like a weasel drew it. LOL

Comment from Lancer1979

Excellent

I like this installment of Wally's adventures. Writes sweet story poems and is an artist too? I'm impressed! I have a gut feeling Wally's in for a heap of trouble. Oh no!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

Let's hope not. He usually behaves himself, but you never know.

Thank you for a lovely review, as always. An artist? Hardly. I draw just badly enough to make it look like a weasel actually did paint it. LOL

reply by Lancer1979 on 25-Apr-2016

I love reading about Wally. You take me back to my childhood when teachers read to their students in the classroom. :)

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

The good old days. 8-)