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To Last Forever

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Poems by Michael

9 total reviews 
Comment from Ricky1024
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Celine Dione immortal ized that song and...
One of my very favorites. I think I heard that her husband passed?
Anywho...
Nicely penned and the art was incredibke too!
Thanks Forwver...
Ricky1024

 Comment Written 12-May-2016


reply by the author on 14-May-2016
    Yea that chick can sing. Hey Rick...-smile-
    ah I don't know ...I seen him once and wondered ....why...not me...ahaha...no...I read somewhere a long time ago...He was ah instrumental in her early success. I believe he got cancer or something...and she stood by him...I'm glad. its good to see that, every once in a while at least. Thank you Bro....love Michael
Comment from Ronni
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Hello Michael,
Truly a most exquisite reflection and loves dedication
to a most cherished rose, very palpable tug at the
emotions in each phrase, at which you excel at ever
so profoundly. Imbued with the warm mixture of
memory and wonder, lingering in between the lines.
Your beloved 'legacy rose' holds the kiss that
has remained as a forever gratifying eternal pledge.
Whomever this rose is, she is very blessed indeed to
be so honored and revered by you.
A most beguiling and stunning poem in verse and
emotive video capture.
Thanks for sharing...
Always/love/ Ronni

 Comment Written 08-May-2016


reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Hello...-smile-
    Pili...I wrote it for Pili.
    and I'm the grateful for having met her.
    thank you...-smile-...always my pleasure when you drop in. love Michael
reply by Ronni on 08-May-2016
    For Pili...this is well deserved and most
    endearing reflection. I am aware of her
    on this site, and read her posts off and
    o. I am glad she is still on here, and
    has you for such a grateful and admiring fan and inspiration.
    Have a terrific week...always, Ronni
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    you too...when I think of you...its good. just want you to know...love-
reply by Ronni on 08-May-2016
    Thank you. Likewise, regarding
    you too. Always, Ronni
reply by Anonymous Member on 11-May-2016
    For Pili...this is well deserved and most
    endearing reflection. I am aware of her
    on this site, and read her posts off and
    o. I am glad she is still on here, and
    has you for such a grateful and admiring fan and inspiration.
    Have a terrific week...always, Ronni
reply by Anonymous Member on 11-May-2016
    Thank you. Likewise, regarding
    you too. Always, Ronni
Comment from Senyai
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Hi Reconciled,
This trips off the tongue with ease and delivers many images one after the other. Your excellent poem reminds me a bit of the Irish poet Dylan Thomas.

Written in a free flowing style lets all the thoughts sweep over the reader.
Great job on this one.

Senyai


 Comment Written 08-May-2016


reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Hi...Senyai-smile-
    I thank you for the comparison...I'll have to look him up.
    appreciate you enjoying my effort. big love Michael
Comment from fimarie78
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This is lovely.

So many interesting, well chosen words. Describing perfectly the beauty of the rose and it's journey.

Fragile as forevermore. A poignant phrase. Nice use of alliteration.

best wishes
Fiona

 Comment Written 08-May-2016


reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Hi Fiona...-smile-
    I thank you kindly...appreciate you enjoying. big love Michael
Comment from royowen
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Any talk of a rose always speaks of Christ, the rise of Sharon, who was crushed for us, emitting the most beautifully tasted aroma. This was the most ultimate of acts which was the most pleasing sacrifice to God, leaving the way clear for us. Well done Michael, beautifully written blessings Roy

 Comment Written 08-May-2016


reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Hey Roy...-smile-..i thank you Sir. yes...when i love big I think of God too...thank you. love Michael
reply by royowen on 08-May-2016
    Most welcome Michael,
Comment from Gloria ....
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Ah such a beautiful poem, Michael. The artwork is amazing and showing the resilience of the rose despite the beating on its delicate petals.

Such is life and you have presented this both poetically and poignantly.

Love it my friend.

Gloria

 Comment Written 08-May-2016


reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    ah she's a beautiful soul...-smile-...I thank God I met her. thank you G. Friends are good for people...love Michael
Comment from l.raven
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HI Michael, Pili truly is as a beautiful Rose and this is dedicated to a beautiful person...I know she will love this...she is an amazing lady...your words are very lovely...and touch the heart...so beautifully written...a stunning picture....and I love the music...love you Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 08-May-2016


reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    yes She is...Hi Linda...-smile-
    I wrote "Spanish Rose" for her years ago.
    I heard from her yesterday...I suppose this is a spin off of I love you. I wish I could subtract and add too...-smile- love you Michael
reply by l.raven on 08-May-2016
    I remember the poem...glad you heard from her...smile...Love U
Comment from Rookette
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Wow! You truly have a way with words (some of which I regret to inform I had to look up definitions to). Your poetry is always deeper than the surface, almost abstract. It's confusing in such a beautiful way and then it all comes together. Such a great read. Look forward to reading more! xoLeslie

 Comment Written 07-May-2016


reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Hi...-smile-
    wow...I love the way you say "beautiful way"
    what'd ya say...?...ahhaha...thank you Gorgeous. love Michael
reply by Rookette on 08-May-2016
    Only giving credit where it's due :) xoLeslie
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Michael,

I loved you poem. You have written it so well. I enjoyed reading it and I look forward to reading more of your work. You may want to take time to read my latest one called "Bridge Tells His Story".

Always your friend. Kat

 Comment Written 07-May-2016


reply by the author on 07-May-2016
    Alright...let me pick up the basement, then I'll be up. are we having fish sticks again tonight...? truthfully I just want a glass of milk, maybe split a pbj...I need to get some rest, pretend like I was never born. I'm sure you understand....thanks Mom.
reply by MizKat on 08-May-2016
    What does pbj mean? You have to write things simply for this old lady. LOL
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    peanut butter and jelly...c'mon Mom...my favorite remember...-headtilt-
reply by MizKat on 08-May-2016
    Sorry I didn't. As I get older I get more forgetful. Sorry.
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Mom...I'm just playing. love you-
reply by MizKat on 08-May-2016
    I know. LOL Love you too!