Astatula (Final Edition)
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Cooked Goose"A young boy tries to turn his life around.Can he?
7 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I'm so far behind that I'm reading the list wrong
Still I find it to be an Interesting read. so until I get it right say a prayer and try to understand my task
Cookie
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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I'm so far behind that I'm reading the list wrong
Still I find it to be an Interesting read. so until I get it right say a prayer and try to understand my task
Cookie
Comment Written 30-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion misscookie. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from judiverse
The judge really has Cody going in this, asking him what he thought about spending time in jail. Cody is so panicked that he will be taken away from the Sheriff and promises that he will not get into any more trouble. The judge puts a scare into the boy, but he seems to relent when he picks Cody up and sets him on his lap. Very intense scene and seems very real. As things are seen through Cody's viewpoint, I doubt that he would use the word "bode." If he's thinking, keep it within his vocabulary. judi
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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The judge really has Cody going in this, asking him what he thought about spending time in jail. Cody is so panicked that he will be taken away from the Sheriff and promises that he will not get into any more trouble. The judge puts a scare into the boy, but he seems to relent when he picks Cody up and sets him on his lap. Very intense scene and seems very real. As things are seen through Cody's viewpoint, I doubt that he would use the word "bode." If he's thinking, keep it within his vocabulary. judi
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Your comments and support appreciated.
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You're quite welcome. Happy Trails.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
A riveting read that kept me engaged and with a character in Cody that seems to conger up the best part of one's heart in wanting to take the young boy in and make things right...complete buy in. Excellent build up and looking forward to subsequent storyline.
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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A riveting read that kept me engaged and with a character in Cody that seems to conger up the best part of one's heart in wanting to take the young boy in and make things right...complete buy in. Excellent build up and looking forward to subsequent storyline.
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Much more to come so stay tuned. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
This is the first chapter I have read, and I will go back and read the rest. For now, I wanted to see your writing style apart from the story itself.
I loved the way you humanized the judge, who seemed intent on grilling Cody as though he was a hardened delinquent.
The story flows well, and is intriguing.
Well done,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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This is the first chapter I have read, and I will go back and read the rest. For now, I wanted to see your writing style apart from the story itself.
I loved the way you humanized the judge, who seemed intent on grilling Cody as though he was a hardened delinquent.
The story flows well, and is intriguing.
Well done,
Rhonda
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from candyfink
It looks the judge may have a good heart after all but we'll see what he decides for Cody.......... thank you for sharing, Brett..
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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It looks the judge may have a good heart after all but we'll see what he decides for Cody.......... thank you for sharing, Brett..
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Stay tuned. Much more to come.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
I'm sure enjoying reading your story about Cody. But of course again you have to keep us in suspense by stopping the story, making us wonder what will happen next. It was nice of to tell us that the judge picked him up and let him sit on his lap, so my guess is that he'll allow Cody to live with the Sherriff or maybe the Judge will take him home with him.
Kat
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Hi Brett,
I'm sure enjoying reading your story about Cody. But of course again you have to keep us in suspense by stopping the story, making us wonder what will happen next. It was nice of to tell us that the judge picked him up and let him sit on his lap, so my guess is that he'll allow Cody to live with the Sherriff or maybe the Judge will take him home with him.
Kat
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Keeping them in suspense keeps them coming back for more. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I am assuming the sheriff is beginning to consider the deputys intrusion as something to be kept under eye for awhile.
Interresting how you have the short pieces that leave one hanging
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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I am assuming the sheriff is beginning to consider the deputys intrusion as something to be kept under eye for awhile.
Interresting how you have the short pieces that leave one hanging
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Your comments and support appreciated.
