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No More Horsing Around

First ride goes badly.

4 total reviews 
Comment from foxangie123
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This I got a big kick out of as you have put such a big smile on my face. A great one hundred word story indeed. Most wonderful entry. Wow.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
    Thank you, AGAIN, Foxy, for your glowing review--it puts a smile on my face!
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

A good short story you have crafted here. I liked the ,asides, in the brackets, especially the first one about ,mouse & feather. What a way to go! Lol
Many a man's dream

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and encouragement--both are very much appreciated!
Comment from Kooky Clown
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I am not a horse riding fan or anything like but I just loved this piece it made me smile and laugh at the line Mammaries Suffocate Rider! lovely read great stuff well done.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
    Thank you so much for the generous rating and encouraging review; both are very much appreciated!


Comment from Bill Schott
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Your story was hilarious! I'm guessing the Pinto was intentional. (What, you're out of ponies?) The visual of being beaten by breasts is delightful. One hundred and forty-six words. Nice job with this.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
    Thank you so much for the generous rating and encouraging review; both are very much appreciated.

    Yes?Pinto was intentional!