Over The Hill
Sadly, I have lost my muse again68 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Dear Jaybird,
Don't' think your Muse has left you
I wouldn't think it's so
Much more your pen will want to do
Much more for you to know
We never will stop learning see
And because we never do
Because each day is different
Our Muse is never through :)
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Dear Jaybird,
Don't' think your Muse has left you
I wouldn't think it's so
Much more your pen will want to do
Much more for you to know
We never will stop learning see
And because we never do
Because each day is different
Our Muse is never through :)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from country ranch writer
Yep, little devils just up and disappear anytime they want and usually when you need them the most.I think they enjoy keeping our life in a turmoil just to keep us on our toes!
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Yep, little devils just up and disappear anytime they want and usually when you need them the most.I think they enjoy keeping our life in a turmoil just to keep us on our toes!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from jenintorre
What? You over the hill ... Never. A nice jaunty little poem about your muse or absence of it perhaps. Great rhyme and metre, as always. Have a nice day. Jen
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What? You over the hill ... Never. A nice jaunty little poem about your muse or absence of it perhaps. Great rhyme and metre, as always. Have a nice day. Jen
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun poem about the Muse that will leave us in an eye wink without saying goodbye to leave us high and dry without a hint of inspiration.
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A very well-written fun poem about the Muse that will leave us in an eye wink without saying goodbye to leave us high and dry without a hint of inspiration.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from elmorose
This wonderful poem gave me both a smile and a chuckle. Those muses have a way of running off just when we need them most. Mine usually comes back with hat askew and a crooked smile. Hopefully yours will do the same!
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This wonderful poem gave me both a smile and a chuckle. Those muses have a way of running off just when we need them most. Mine usually comes back with hat askew and a crooked smile. Hopefully yours will do the same!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
Comment from Joy Graham
Oh you're just kidding. Your muse is in evidence all throughout this poem :) You have a perfect contest entry about your muse. Your muse is smiling and patting itself on the back right now. Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
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Oh you're just kidding. Your muse is in evidence all throughout this poem :) You have a perfect contest entry about your muse. Your muse is smiling and patting itself on the back right now. Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
Comment from 24chas
I enjoyed this read, Jaybird1. I think you really captured what so many on this site go through. It's so frustrating but you seem to have come through it. Nice job.
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I enjoyed this read, Jaybird1. I think you really captured what so many on this site go through. It's so frustrating but you seem to have come through it. Nice job.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
Comment from Suzie Q
I loved this! I'm glad you like poetry that rhymes. I feel the same way as well. It's difficult for me not to rhyme! I truly enjoyed reading this. It flows so well. I especially liked "But if perchance you spot it, please send it home to me. I'm sure you would not want it, it holds no high degree" Beautiful ending! Well said!
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I loved this! I'm glad you like poetry that rhymes. I feel the same way as well. It's difficult for me not to rhyme! I truly enjoyed reading this. It flows so well. I especially liked "But if perchance you spot it, please send it home to me. I'm sure you would not want it, it holds no high degree" Beautiful ending! Well said!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
Comment from Louise Michelle
What a fun-to-read poem. If your muse is gone, then I think another might have taken her place. Or maybe this whole muse thing is a scam. It was a pleasure to read this, lots of cute lines.
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What a fun-to-read poem. If your muse is gone, then I think another might have taken her place. Or maybe this whole muse thing is a scam. It was a pleasure to read this, lots of cute lines.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
Comment from meeshu
your not over the hill, Jaybird1. you are just getting started. I don't know if you would like my muse, I think she's crazy. nice write, outstanding.....................meeshu
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your not over the hill, Jaybird1. you are just getting started. I don't know if you would like my muse, I think she's crazy. nice write, outstanding.....................meeshu
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
